Is chapter 184 the truely the end ? it would seems way to soon i'm only 20 chapters away and it looks like the story is just starting but then there are the words END at chapter 184 ?!?!?!?!
Ahh amazing!!! I don't usually read too much action stories such as this, but because of you, I'm going to start reading! And yours is going to be on the topic of my list hehe. It's awesome! You drew me in with your world building and action. I also loved how it's fast paced and exciting in every chapter and the writing is FLAWLESS. I recommend this to anyone wanting to read a fast-paced, full of action novel. Awesome job author!!!
I'd say this novel is most interesting. I really enjoyed reading it, though I normally don't enjoy reading horror. It was very creative and suspenseful at times. Overall I really loved it!
Story started out great, was really getting into it. However, as of the most current chapters(90), the last few have been very iffy. The interaction with the Germinal boss after the base sabotage for instance was pretty sloppy and downright stupid. Story seems to be going downhill. Not to mention the sub par release rate and the author/translator selling out for premium.
this is an awesome vrmmorpg novel ive read in here! one of my fav so far! i love everything about t! five stars for me! couldn't wait to read more!
Read first few chapters looks interesting. This one looks different. Well, not going to say anymore. I am going to give this a try.[img=recommend][img=recommend]
Great story that gets you hooked at the very beginning. There is so much tension and suspense that keeps you wanting to know more. Just few chapters in but I'm already hooked. Kudos Author
Unfortunately I can't find the RAW's for this.. But, Here is an Alternative:
重生：我能听见校花的内心独白 - Rebirth: I can hear the inner monologue of the schoolgirl
Hopefully this Book will get Selected..
This is basicaly a brainwashing harem novel. Whoever the MC binds with feels a sense of familiarity with him and the system also foces him to interact with them.
I'm currently around chapter 40, and so far I have really enjoyed the book. HOWEVER, there is one thing that has been bugging me ever since chapter 1.. the writing style.
While I am extremely happy that there aren't many grammatical mistakes (almost none to be honest, which is rare), the author uses far too many simple sentences that it feels like reading a 1st grader's book.
"Isaac likes to sing.
he enjoys it.
Sophia, on the other hand, doesn't.
Alice likes her elder brother."
Of course, the content of the above example is made up, however, the sentence structure is identical to the story.
The author needs to stop having 1 line paragraphs and minimise the use of simple sentences
lemme tell you a little story about a boy..
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Novel was good
It's a shame its didn't continue........ ........... ........ .. ............. ............................. ............ .................