I think this is one of the only times I’ve given such a bad review. I’m just mad at the novel seeming like it has potential but ruining it from even chapter 1-horrible writing quality(unnecessary repeating of what is said to bloat chapters)(the writing style is also awful since it is all just monologue after monologue) there is literally no emphasis on what is happening, so we are 25 chapters through and he has done almost nothing, he has just woken up for his second day.-adding wayyy tooo many anime “inspirations” that it makes the power system a mess(btw it is even blatantly copying people and powers from anime’s)The worse part of it is the combination of powers from each anime apparently Nen is mana and can be combined with devil fruits to produce an explosion reactionDevil fruits-forbidden fruitBlackbeard- forgot his alternate nameMonkey d dragon- something d somethingHaki-forgot something about soul attacksShadow monarch-dark sovereignDjinn from magi-djinn from magiNen hxh- NenOverlordBlack clover books-black clover booksEtc these are just the ones on top of my head
How is it even possible that QI let a novel with zero chapters...get released ...I am quite disappointed in this tbh. I’d rather second place in votes be chosen as I know two two TLS groups are on A game with releases.
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
First!!! Haha no one cares, but anyway this novel sounds nice and knowing webnovel the translation will probably suck and i may change my review and delete this one if i have to.
I like the writing style, it's good and it has relatively good grammar and punctuation. the problem is you're trying to mix a character who is overpowered and a character who has no power and acting like they would make the same decision and mistakes. But what really gave me a problem was how complicated you made it so early on. It felt like you were trying to make the book one of those really big worlds that are really complicated without putting in the effort to write hundreds or even a thousand chapters. I think this story has great potential, but you need to think about your spacing and the type of character you want.
I don't think there are words to describe how captivating this book is❤
So are they childhood lovers or what?
I really hope nora ends up with Karen
please update
I love this book, karima always makes amazing story
This book deserves a five star , keep it up
It’s time for Molly wedding and the children to come back into the story. And wrap this story up. It’s more interesting with the children and their plots with their uncles Molly need to go home and stop neglecting her children. She can have a careers at home.