The story seems interesting and the different povs are somewhat refreshing. Good thing that the moments when the pov changes are marked clearly, as otherwise it could be very confusing.Whish there were more chapters to read through!
An interesting stories for me to read. Deception being ruthless, scheming, psychology attack damn it worth to read this kind of stories. Hopefully u can write till the end.
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A lovely start ? this shameless reader demands for more chapters! (ノಠ益ಠ)ノ彡┻━┻And I hope our doggo will write more when u have time cuz leaving us on a cliff hanger is a big nono :PThank u for the chapter~ ganbatte ?
Amazing novel with charismatic and distinct characters and a well-built world background despite being so new. There's also great balance of seriousness and comedy that kept me hooked to the story and made me love the characters even more.To those who are skeptical about the Harem tag, please don't let it affect your opinion and give it a chance. This novel has very in-depth character design and the relationships among each other are profound and heartwarming. Also, if you want to see extra content join the author's Discord server!
Excellent choice I picked when I began this reading. I had never read a system cultivation where it really had to work for it. I also like that it is about starting an elite school ? keep up the good work.
Great novel, I can’t get enough of it. The one thing that bothers me though is that there is just not enough chapters to satisfy me.
Interesting concept so far, I've read up till chapter 34 so what is to be said going forward is only relevant up till those chapters.Recommendations to the author:1. Get someone to edit your chapters, doesn't have to be a professional editor. In fact, you could also pass it through an application that checks that type of thing automatically. Some misspelled words that are fundamental to the stories development and world background, such as Devine (Divine). As well as some normal misspelling, like: rediculous instead of ridiculous and their when it should be there. Anyways, those are some ****** examples.2. Fix some verb tenses to match with the correct english grammar to make the story flow better.3. Would recommend an overhaul on your sentence structures to make them "smoother". Example, instead of "It was summer. The sun was hot and bright. In the Wissian town there was a colosseum. In the colosseum a fight is happenning between the two magicians. The crowd is cheering for their respective supporting fighters" It was summer and the sun was shining strongly upon the colosseum located in the town of Wissian; where two magicians where currently dueling making the crowd go wild, while cheering for their favored fighter. Excuse my grammar mistakes, even though I am criticizing I am not necessarily a good writer. I think that if you made those corrections your story would be so much better. Nevertheless, it's a very interesting story which I will continue to read since it has got interesting concepts and . So kudos to the author.
Reading this book reminds me of "Sign In Buddha's Palm". They have different concept and story but similarities are there. For example- the late arrival of the Golden Finger, the story starts with Buddhism, close with a younger sister, the MC are patient and smart but they have a deep obsession. SIBP's mc want to achieve immortality while LLE's mc want to take everything that belongs to him back.All in all, the two books are very good to me. They deserve full stars.
This novel just should not exist. It's "chinese tropes: the novel" and none of it is even used right. It's like baby's first chinese novel. I can't in good conscience recommend this novel to anybody at all.
Although the writing can be a little spotty with imperfect prose snd spelling, the story itself is good enough to excuse it. Especially the start can be rough as it takes an almost painfully realistic approach to character development. Some humans could quickly adapt, but not everyone. This is why most of humans die off in the end of the world setting see. Zhang Dong is in the latter categor, a truly good person unfit for war. Fortunately he spawned in strong enough to be able to somehow live through it. He has come far through the story and still has a long way to go. I'm cheering for him, although I secrerly want him to get a 3rd child who just happens to have a constitution suited for evil. He did get seperated from his wife right after smex time. Of course, that is just my fantasy. This is a wonderful tale of a kind man with an even kinder heart. I do emphasise with him a lot through the story and I genuenly wish happiness to him. If you came here for mundane face slapping and murderhobo events, you are out of luck. This is a very gentle tale set in a not so gentle world. Zhang Dong had set his goal to change the world for the better, for everyone. I know that demonic cultivation is attractive to most folk, but keep in mind that Zhang Dong is a holy cultivator to the bone. Thank you author for writing what is arguably one of my favourite novels. :)
It's an amazing novel, I would buy this book without a second thought if I found it in a bookstore. It's a shame that the author deserves the name ''LaziestDragon'' haha