Story was mediocre at best. Ended up dropping it once the MC raped a girl.
Not worth the read and can’t recommend this to anyone to be honest.
one of the worst novel I have read .I hope it never gets chosen. the mc is stupid extreme one at that. his decisions make me want to find him and kill him 1000 times
Well i don't really understand why you made your premium chapters with no grammar issue but kept your free chapters full of errors..... (they are the most important because it's them that make the readers stay or leave)
Other than this your novel is pretty good.
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IN MY LIFE I NEVER LAUGH THIS BEFORE HAHAHAHA WHEN I READ IN CHAPTER 2 HAHAHAHA BANQUET YOUR HEAD BROOO HAHAHAHA
the story is great I just can't get enough of this story I would recommend it please keep up the good work author
Alright, an update for my shameless review. I'll be deleting my other author review since that would be unfair if I just left it like that. I'm not petty.
Anyway, first things first, this fiction got contracted. Good side, I'll be posting about 2 chaps a day again, continuously, for four months and probably for the rest of the fic. (I need that MGS) Bad side, for the free readers that is, I'll be going premium (locking chapters) once I get to a satisfactory amount of chapters (a.k.a. 100+ chaps) and locking it at around maybe vol 2, or 3, depends on how long vol 2 will be since the Civil War arc will be a long journey.
I need to get some money for my family somehow in this trying times... Screw covid-19...
Second, this fic will be getting darker and darker as it progresses, not because I want to, but because of the world I built when I was brainstorming ideas for the fiction... It may not be now, but in the future, it will.
How my brain comes up with these ideas, I never know... I already have a portion of the map from making it on inkarnate! I'll share the link once it's done.
Lastly... There is no lastly... All I can do is implore you, please read the book.
it's tough to maintain 6 couples throughout and many times I feel that I lose focus but then it beings it back together which is a nice experience to have since my attention span is not that good.
didnt understand amything too many names
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140 word count
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The story isn't bad. The writing though... A bit fast paced. Frequently doesn't go into much detail which leaves the story feeling a little empty at times. I give this 3 stars
The rating is real, but the review is just me complaining, so don’t take it seriously. It‘s a good novel, be it in Writing Quality, Character Design or World background. Still, I dropped it at chapter 10 and I am sure I’m not the only one. The thing is, Mc kills zombies and tries to save a girl then gets shot on and robbed by the survivors who hid themselves. After he killed all the zombies + the girl cuz she turned. The survivors shot him because he is a ‚Murderer‘ even though they know that those guys are zombies…. Yeah. He then got robbed by them, joined them and got all chummy with them. Sure, that is maybe the best rational choice. But it leaves a bad aftertaste and I dropped the novel because of it. I mean, he could just escape from them to the direction of the super market, remove the bullet and recover with his ability. Level up a bit and the come back to take revenge. At least that is what I would have done.