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An amazing novel with an interesting plot. Read the first chapter and was intrigued by it. The opening was good, dialogues are well written. Narration entices the reader to continue.
Will look forward to further chapters. Good luck Author!
a good mixture of modern and ancient....good world building and power system....................................................................
guys guys guys. its a hidden gem, trust me. I went in with low expectations, but this is truly a good read(i know, a rare occurrence on this app). Somehow, author manages to make the edgy mc not cringe(mostly), and, the comedy hits. Whether it be poorly named superheroes or actual jokes it manages to make me laugh(also a rare occurrence on this app).give it a read, also, give it say... 5-10 chaps before deciding if you like it or not. That was enough time for me to like it.
This novel is a very lighthearted story with a very OP MC. And I mean very overpowered, along the lines of One Punch Man. He has long surpassed everyone because his strength grows even when he’s not doing anything. That being said, there isn’t too much action so far. But if you like super OP MCs, then the action scenes that have been written are quite satisfying. And it’s pretty clear that the story that the MC will soon have to deal with more and more enemies.
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Just a little grammar mistakes but I liked how these jokes are presented. Good work ? . How much do I need to write seriously they should really reduce reviews writing length!
The novel is great, the world-building and the progress of the story are immersive and all of that is ruined by a stupid goat that is why I dropped the novel. Mc is a man with intact memories of his past and blessed by the Gods but he still took a goat as his mother
I have completely fallen in love with this story. The plot line is so interesting and fun to read. I like reading from the different POV cause it helps me understand the characters better.
This book is very good. I have been searching for a similiar book for weeks. I would recommend this book to everyone who likes WH40K and The Gamer.
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Writing Quality:
It's not too bad.
Story Development:
Filled with tropes that don't make sense, was literally mentioned a chapter ago that their family was rich and was basically the Kingpin of the area so why wouldn't they have bodyguards?
I get the MC, he's feeling restless since his "body" is telling him to fight but I don't get why people would act that way towards him when they know for a fact that his days are numbered.
Character Design:
Aside from the MC, everyone is cut-outs.
Updating Stability:
Can't even rate that since this is on trial read.
World Background:
Won't rate it since it's only started