I really wanted to like this story, but it's not for me.I really loathe all the side characters and all the PoV shifts, it makes the story unnecessarily hard to read and follow. I just don't care about most of the side characters and it just becomes filler. I have probably skipped about 30 % of the chapters to get to chapter 116.
Truly engaging with new sub-plot lines for every dungeon the MC encounters. The MC is quite the capable person and makes the best of every opputunity that may or may not come his way by diligent assessment of his surroundings; and the use of cunning and pure willpower to live on to deal with dangerous moments. The supporting player characters are individually intriguing in their own right. (Lawless is a particularly humorous side character pair with our MC-the straight man in this comedy duo) The natives to the various dungeons the MC enters are all spectacularly realistic during their interactions, leaving the reader terribly saddened by their short and limited show time. In conclusion, this is quite a thriller action-packed story with alevel-headed MC worth investing in.
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This is awesome...great storyline, great character development, great plot development. Everything is just awesome except for me thing... There are many spelling errors. Nothing big. Keep up the good work ? ? ?
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This novel is just boring.And the title is a lie.Gu is about poison and poisonous creatures not worms....................................
Man the author forgets about the novel name and start cultivation novel.the author is also inconsistent and things are mix and hard to understand sometimes.
The title... it just speaks to me.
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A book that emphasizes on the importance of religion/God. So cool. As a Christian myself, it's definitely something that interests me. Also I love the Bible quote at the end of the synopsis.
Please try and pay attention to the tense of the words you use, some of your sentences are incomplete or too short. As well as some words are misspelled, but overall still understandable and thankfully your pronouns are good.When did and why does Shiyuki have a crystal heart? I thought Shiroe was the only one to have one, because it was an experiment from that 'woman' that their grandmother gave permission for her to experiment with Shido?Thanks for the chapter, looking forward to the next one!!!View More
I really like it. It is reasonably paced and so far the tropes are there but it isn’t forced and feels like natural. Ch25