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It's very good...Hope it gets picked.....................❤️
this seems fun
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I'm sorry but this is simply too slow for a system like that.Also he relies way more on materialistic (cultivation wise) things than his own power. It's like his priorities and the system. priorities. are towards items instead of permanent growth. The MC gave me a headache.
1. I got a dig bick
2. You that read wrong
3. You read it wrong also
4. You checked
5. You smiled
7. You are wondering why you still reading this
8. You see the mistake right? (on7)
10. But did you see I skipped number 6?
10. You checked
11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9
13. And did you see I skipped number 2
14. You got tricked
15. But did you see that I skipped number 12
16. You checked and wondered why I am wasting my time on this. ( You got tricked )
a great novel............. it has a lot of potential...................................................................................................
This novel is meh, it is below average and the characters are really annoying. MC lacks iq and the writers writing style is kinda meh.
It's a good plot, the characters are written well which is very engaging! Author work is much appreciated. Hope he updates with constant chapters.
The synopsis will make you read for more. It is intriguing and interesting enough to catch your attention. Keep up the good work! Can't wait to read further! [img=recommend]
Exciting!!! I have read the first few chapters of this story and I found it to be intriguing. I used the audio reading and i enjoyed it. The plot and the setting is okay.
Good job author ?
i do wonder if the chapter of this new rewritten novel is the same with the old version's novel chapters :/ like if the chap 100 of this is chap100 of the older version or does the author changes many things from the older version?
The first writing is still one of my favorite web novels and I can't wait to see what you'll add to the story. -!_!- -!_!- -!_!- -!_!- -!_!-
I cant really offer anything much of criticism as of yet. The story starts out with the MC getting a weak pet cat as a contract beast who needs to be able to fight with ferocious monsters. He gains a nurturing system that allows him to progress the contract beast's state as long as the MC does things that make it happy. He can upgrade the quality of the bloodline as well as it's level progression. He is also able to increase other aspects of his beast.To start off his little cat is female, so based on the title I was actually expecting it to quickly gain human form. From what I have read so far it requires some nurturing. Also even before gaining human form the cat has some human attributes, such as jealousy and affection. The cat always wants to sleep in his bed with him. This should not be a problem, but it looks like in CH20 it gains a loli-human form. This could pose a problem with many of the readers here. I will update my review based on further reading.As of now I enjoyed the content and found it to not be displeasing from the storytelling standpoint. It seems to be better written then many similar stories, though the system design and progression seems to be a bit weak.
