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The synopsis looked interesting but I can't be sure how the book really would be.. so I started reading it and yep.. this is a good story alright... just go for it.. keep up the good work author..
after reading to the end lf volume 1, this novel is a hidden gem i could say.its not perfect but still a better than a lot of popular novels here.i found some chapters to be bad but most of the times its so good.this novel is underrated imo.
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i look at the MTL the league tournaments will take 150 chaps to finish, which is bullsh*t I'mma drop this sh*t. right now srsly 240+ chaps and the mc is still in rank sixth.
you guys should support this novel its pretty good
One day, Zhang Fan, a poor medical student, receives a medical system from the future. This turns him into a new shining star in the medical field. Along the way, he must face medical corruption, competition, and infighting from other doctors, and even find time for a love life as he strives for the top of the medical field!
Bad story and character period. Waste of time
This novel is bad, not because the writing, the grammar or even the world background. The MC is way too OP, but that can be a feature, the system rewards and weapon stats are stupidly simple, mostly because it is a linear increase. The MC has no reason to increase his skill or produce more powerfull weapons. He could literally mass produce the most inferior kind and grow faster than he does in the story.
You might be used to these kinds of errors in web novels and you would be right to argue that a good story can stand above such trivialities. You might even be right.
The problem is, this story has one of the worst character designs I have ever seen, even some harem novels have side characters with better design. I am used to the usual Goddess with amazing talent, skill, wealth etc. falling in love with the seemingly useless trash MC. It is badly done here, but alright. The catastrophe starts with the fact that the MC sleeps with her, fights the major forces of his hometown for her, risks himself and his masters/adoptive fathers smithy, supports her clan and then decides to leave her behind. It is not like he is in danger, needs something to grow stronger or a friend or family member is in danger. He just doesn't seem to care anymore, he literally wasted 3 years trying to forge, but after his first success at making a 3 tier weapon he loses interest. His love, his masters legacy , the war inside the city just do not matter anymore. It is not like he is a pervert, scumbag or an evil character. He is just flat. The author decided the MC needed to change character and wasn't interested in making up a reason.
The other characters are also flat and inconsequential, so it is not like there is anything to look forward to.
2nd of 5 new novels that is trash.
Although there is yet chapters to be done, the story is progressing like any other wuxia style or martial art style light novel. I give this a 5 stars for now until proven otherwise.
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this is pretty funny i like it
I believe in Magic and this book is magical. Continue making great novels in your life and you are going somewhere great. I believe in you and good luck to you.
