I love the novel so much that I forgot to review it, It's really a breath of fresh air, not a very unique idea but executed well and realistic development.
Amei! Impressionante, gostei muito das frases de efeitos, quando nós é apresentado o ferreiro, quando o bebê vira mulher e é falado as qualidades dela e principalmente esse final, amei o eu lírico, amei a protagonista ser uma mulher, amei a força asustadora do vilão e dos Deuses. Nota 10
Amazing story ... Definitely unlocking more chapters ?... Good job author ?
My brutally honest review after reading all the published chapter Firstly the writing and story development is not bad however they are some issues with clarity as Junior a crown prince was getting stood up by a regular maid since the novel hadn't reviewed anything about the maids background I am assuming its just a regular maid who somehow had more authority than the protagonist suppossed sister and had the status to think about talking to a prince with a tone of an adult lecturing a naughty child mannerSecondly there are quite a number of cring shit which could potentially cause readers to stop following your bookThirdly the encounter between Junior and his sister especially how they made up was quite forced and heavily unrealistic saying some words like I love you at the end, from what I understand he had no place to say that even tho he wasn't actually the one who had treated her badly, it was even more absurd as the maid didn't feel something wrong as the protagonist who suddenly had a change of heart starts calling out strong words like i love you also dont get started on the latest chapter the protagonist literally said he loved someone he just met and Helen got jealous about that ? Helen didn't even seem to be in love with the protagonist before that and to add Junior was a total jerk so unless she had special preferences that was just forced in other to have her as a potential harem memberNevertheless it wasn't actually as bad as I expected and managed to keep me interested at least until the last chapter so Ill rate it a 4.0
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Man those chapter numbers, those should be in three digits. This much is not enough to satisfy me. I'm waiting for new chapters. Hurry up and get back to work author. Can't leave me waiting.
Wow ??, this novel Captivate me from the beginning, it's really interesting to read, I seem to stop reading it once I started, good job author
This is a very good book and i enjoyed it so much. Thanks for the writing Mr.Author
Hey author here. Am just starting my first book and I bet you it will be fun to read and eye catching. It would be nice if you tell me your thoughts about my book
The book is very good. The Grammer, the plot and the settings seem to create a spark. Good work author
good book love it especially the characters
Definitely worth the read! glad I found this and got sucked in!