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Absolutely one of the best books I have ever read. Can't describe in words. Truly amazing and mind-blowing. Twist after twist after twist. I love all the mysterious and darkness. Perfect doss of spicy and plot. I love all the characters. Lia is my fav. Sage is my baby. Although his story broke my heart. I wanted Ira and Jaxton to have their own book. Alpha really went from so much and but I'm that in the end he got a happy ending with the love of his and boyfriend Lia. Anyone wondering about reading it. Go for it, you're in a ride. It's so so soooo good. ❤️❤️❤️Thank you author for this gem ???❤️❤️❤️????? You're truly so talented.
?????, finally something different, now getting reincarnated has a mushroom lol ????? I'll just smash the MC to pieces ????, the MC sounds so weak
Good Novel. I'll see how it will approach its neighbouring countries
just like my goat fang yuan shin will continue to persevere till he changed.
Nice story, compelling characters and overall it's a good book
This is an interesting thing. It's like a top version of H*ntai. There's no plot. It is a wish fulfillment novel. I wonder how far it will go. Still, it's a bit boring as it has a straight logic. It could be better. His actions would have been more satisfying if he had improved the characters and their backstory.
I’ve caught up with the current chapters, and here’s my take.The MC is undeniably a villain, though in the early chapters, it doesn’t feel that way. At first, he genuinely wanted to save Daehyun and Aliyah, but once he realized they were no longer useful, he ultimately chose to kill Daehyun instead. After Volume 1, his morality becomes more questionable as he starts treating everyone like pawns. That said, up until Chapter 30, aside from killing Daehyun, his actions haven’t been as bad as I initially expected.I did understimated the plot, I thought it would be just another academy plot thing. For example, why does Elijah’s body look exactly like Gaia’s? Why is Calliope undetected by the system? And also with the hints that there will be outer God planning to invade the Earth. There seems to be some bible kind of plot going on here, which honestly the author did good on fitting the story line.So far, every chapter has felt fresh and not repetitive, which I truly appreciate. I hope the progression maintains this pace because the story gets more compelling the further you read.
I just think this level of Yandere makes for terrible MCs.The MCs personality is the disgusting obsession yandere, not to be mistaken with a possessive villain MC.The writing is very good outside of suspension of disbelief. I have no idea how a god of fate didn't anticipate being tricked in a demon ritual by a mortal.... or how an ancient goddess didn't anticipate a trap/catch in the ritual. The 2 gods we see in the beginning seem to lack knowledge expected of gods. This just isn't my cup of tea, I don't like Yandere MCs, I don't like people lacking knowledge for the sake of plot, and I hate forced romance (MC tricks the goddess into binding their souls)If you like disgusting MCs, then you will very enjoy this story.
Nice premise, looking forward to reading some more!.....................................................................................................................................
The first few chapters already make sure this book is not for children. this is adult book hahaha rare for this author. will see the development. Sayonara
One of the best starts of a novel in a long timeI am quite impressed seeing this quality of work from an amature writer. One rarely sees this level of writing skill and attention to detail in most novels. Its very difficult to make characters believable and alive and by the end of 39 there are 3 character I felt a human connect with the mc, his sister and mother. This is quite an accomplishment as many books are not even able to create a believable mc with 50+ characters. I genuinely felt empathy for these characters. I am not trying to glaze the author but I truly respect authors who are able to do this. I really hope this continues.I also appreciate how intresting the power mc has. Its not a typical system which gives everything to the mc for free. There is actually a cost to strength. And a believable way for mc to develope a more reserved personality. Finally I believe everyone should give this book a try and support the author. We can’t allow this hidden gem to go unnoticed any longer.
I absolutely loved it! The fantasy world you created is so beautiful and imaginative. Your descriptions brought everything to life, and I felt like I was right there in the story. You have a wonderful talent for storytelling, and I can't wait to see what you come up with next. Keep up the amazing work!
