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A story with a lot of potential. If you like demon hunter, an OP MC, a dorkable sidekick type of stories, then this is the one for you.
Writing Quality: It's not bad, and it's an easy read. 5* as Author is continuously improving and you can see that the quality between first chapter and later chapters have improved greatly..
Stability of Updates: 5* as author delivers as promised.
Story Development: It's a good build-up. It's not a ****** 'hunt-bash' type of story, as it also shows some human interaction of his daily life.
Character Design: 4* as there's not much real description about the characters themselves. I can see their personalities but it feels a bit 2D to me due to the lack of description of emotions or things like that. So you can't truly emphatize or bond with them.
World Background: 5* just cuz the damn are cute.
Keep on writing to fuel the passion!
Love it
all good but you do realize if you don't click onto the story it says Rise of the zodiac ki. fill in the gaps and a person who hasn't recognized this as king would probably think your story is rise of the zodiac killer. might gain or lose some people who might have read your story if they knew it was king. I thought it'd be killer. that's why I clicked on this.
Read this a while back. Reading it again now, this author has created a proper book. Keep it up.
Does it have fantasy elements ? I mean super powers etc cuz there’s no tag but the names and titles of chapters seem to indicate it
If youre the type that likes reading VR related stories then try this out. There are some errors in grammars but it is still understandable. Also the Author's native language is not english.
The story itself is original. Having no binding class will let characters choose what's really useful or what they want to play.
Good Grammar, Good Character Development, Good Story Overall. Still pretty early in the novel and so far I'm loving it. Keep up the good work Author.
Thanks for picking up this book to read.
Just to explain a few things... to prepare you, readers, for what you're about to read.
Santa Claus is the protagonist of this story, but I hope you all have open minds about it. The first few chapters contain a lot of info, but it's necessary.
Rest assured, he doesn't remain a bearded old man forever.
He has subordinates, a System, and quite a number of things, really...
But that doesn't make things any easier or less interesting. Trust me, you're in for a treat.
I give this novel Five Stars, not just because of my bias as an Author, but because I truly believe it deserves it. If you don't think so, kindly let me know in the comments... or by writing a review of your own to explain why.
I welcome criticisms.
I certainly hope you find this book to your liking, even though it's so very niche.
Well, then, happy reading!
Overall a amazing read so far
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First and foremost, the first few chapters were enough to captivate the reader to read on. The chapters were all interesting, making the reader wonder what will happen next. The storyline is good while the character's are set up perfectly as well!
Grammar's quite flawless too so keep up the good work Author ^.^!
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why is mc still a wingman it is getting frustating to read