I just wrote a big review and it did not save, so I'm going to cry real hard, excuse me.From the little that I have read, this novel is quite ordinary in its premise but quite promising nonetheless. World background: from the little I've seen, Author-san shows us their world and society with actions more than with long descriptions, so that's pretty nice. Can't say much about story development yet, but what I can say is that my attention was properly hooked up and I can't wait to see more from it.Character Design: I think it's a bit early to review this topic since the characters were not truly flashed out yet. However, they do feel unique and discernable from one another and not a bunch of mindless puppets.Writing Quality: It always feels a bit hypocritical reviewing this topic on stories from non-native speakers, because I'm too learning the language. There're some small typos and weird sentences but they did not compromise my reading experience. What did stand out for me were some complex( in a good way) sentences that were well made contrasting with the weird ones, but that's natural, just a bit peculiar.THE BIGGEST TOPIC: I don't know how or why, but what I can see in this novel is a lot of care and love from Author-san on writing this. They wish to share the same happy feelings they feel when doing all this and I think that's quite a good mentality. Always answering questions and engaging with readers. Suggestions: It's easy to say ' get an editor' but's not easy to do it. So here is my small type that I hope can help you. When you write on the author's note the explanation of something you felt confusing, that's a sign to go back and try redoing it. Sometimes we write something so obvious on our heads that we do not make it explicit in the text. It's a hard process to imagine what others will think when reading your text but I think it does help.Keep the good work!
This novel is trash like its stupid MC. If you don’t want to let your brain cell die then dont read this. I gave 5 star because author delete low star actual review of the novel.
I was originally going to be brief, but this god damn 140 character requirement. Anyhow, thank you all for reading. I sincerely hope you enjoy as I, the author, and you, the reader, traverse this path.
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This story give gave me the best parts of my favourite stories and is doing a dam good job of crafting a wonderful story. If only more chapters would come out at a time, when you start reading you just don't want to stop.
I want this so bad it's amazing I would want this one more then anyone of the other books..........................,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,..
It's okay but it irked me how the female lead keep questioning the MC again and again despite proving himself right again and again. For example (Spoiler) : She lost contact and mortgage her car instead of borrowing 700k from MC for her brother medical bill. That just after MC go shopping and bought her 390k worth of clothes and have one of the richest man in the city begging and flattering him in front of her. Also after MC give her 10million worth of medical presciption.
The author is an idiot. "All rights reserved". You don't even know what that means! Quote, "All rights reserved" is a copyright formality indicating that the copyright holder reserves, or holds for its own use, all the rights provided by copyright law. P.S.You don't have any of those rights. You copied it from Wuxia-world.
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it was good novel i like it
Genuinely enjoyed this book, the way it begun and how it would keep me wanting to keep reading. Each character was consistent to the timeline too and the way it was written was believable. Loved it very much!
your story is on fire girl great going