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Really good so far. The mc is a very interesting person.
The story also is a very interesting concept. I like it. You write in a way that is very interesting.
Keep up with the good work
more please it's really good, like where it's going and please dont drop as most system novels in this theme dont last long... thank you!!!!
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I haven't read this yet but these story ideas are getting a little out of hand. Reincarnating as a stone? Has creativity just left the house or something? I am sure it is a good read the first couple but im not really sure it will last.
i really like it
The novel is very interesting and very different, a great read to get out of the same cliché (despite having its clichés... cough young master cough). The criticism is that the author gets a lot lost talking about things out of the context of the moment, character and scene, things like people working and the place where she is working (which adds nothing and consumes 1 chapter, if not many).
I'm up to date on raws and it's pretty good, at least much higher quality than the usual sewage we get. Unfortunately, this story is a slowburn. The worldbuilding is interesting, the characters are fleshed out but each small arc takes about 150 chapters. Hopefully by chapter 1000 the first big arc will be completed and MC will get out of novice village. I recommend voting and adding this to your libraries.
the item level is a bit messy, for example the god grade item's should have more stronger effects because it's already at the pinnacle but no, it only look's like a gold equipment for me.
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