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This book is sooooooo good....I was searching for english translation for a very long time...Thank you so much for translating and uploading......PLEASE CONTINUE TO GIVE US THIS PRECIOUS UPDATES [img=update][img=update].....
The summary is fake, got my hopes up for nothing............................................................................................................
Hey, Translator? Are you going to continue to post chapters on WebNovel? Or is there somewhere else that you will post chapters?
A typical wish-fulfillment story where everything that could go right for the MC does go right. Every powerful woman he meets around his age ends up falling for him.
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20 chapters and I’ already pretty hooked this is a weapons system novel that’s so far really good I hope to see this author stick to this story!
Some parts I only read once that might need to be proof read but I’v been Reeding on here all day now so I might be wrong
I really like the story. Even if we're all busy authors, I like magic and going to kepp my eyes on the updates.
About the story. I like the plot and idea, I like how it goes, however I feel the main hero is a little bit too quick chosen by the teachers. Though it's not bad at all if it's well-explained.
Keep going!
The story starts of with the mystery of Malchatric blood which leaves suspense to readers as the story jumps to some years in the future. It's an awesome read and I highly recommend it. Great job author.
The story moves extremity fast... so fast in fact the author leaves most of the story unwritten in their haste to write it. Still it could be an enjoyable read for those who don't mind filling the missing 80%. The story really needs the author to go back through and fill in the story and it would easily be a decent story
Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
I see a lot of potential here just after reading the first couple chapters. The unique way the dialogue is written is very attention grabbing. It's not what most authors do, and I think its an excellent style that is very similar to movie scripts which really helps push your imagination. I hope the author will continue leaning into that!
The world is also VERY interesting and EXTREMELY unique, but in my opinion more time needs to be spent easing us into it. Its very jarring to go from one idea or concept to another with so little time in between. As a reader I like more time to invest in an interesting concept and having so many interesting concepts thrown at me one right after the other is very overwhelming.
The story is easy to read and is detailed when characters or graphic scenes are concerned. You won't be disappointed once reading. ??????????????
