Great book, but should capture more of the dugout antics in baseball, like rally caps and stuff. There’s a bunch of videos on youtube of MLB players messing around in the dugout to get ideas from
liked it, want more, no other opinion accepted. really appreciated. jaa ne~
the story seemed interesting but the auhor stupidity runied it. i mean there is no logical sense in any actions the MC does. Do you ever see a 4 year old wandering around alone? He takes taxi? No matter how good a society is, this is not posible and these little things ruined the story for me.
Nice story with a stable character, little to no grammatical errors as of now waiting to see how it goes, Hmm, don't know abt how the update goes will wait before commenting.
content filled with pedophilia and grooming, don't read it unless you want to risk jail time.
Well as proofreader and editor least to say I´m pro novel xD
But as reader myself I think the story has grat potential, it´s the authors first novel so well things always start from somewhere and I think with time will only get better. As for now well MC is still a child, and as we all now which child hasn´t thrown a tantrum or behaves like a little shithead ^^
I love the way the MC is and I can´t w8 how he will develop growing up .....like maybe fall in love, making friends, loosing familymember, remember past, getting knowled about his real human parents , etc.....so let´s ride the bus and hope for a good journey :D!
Author-san keep up the creative work, don´t go dying on me because of exhaustion :P
I'm liking the fact that the main character is starting to grow. Not going to lie and say that I was a little off put by how dense the main character was. But the fun this is that the succubus inside her head is doing a good job of steering her where she needs to go. I'm looking forward to seeing how the rest of this pans out.
Pls, don't mind the grammar bad review since it finally got fixed just recently... so in short, you can finally read it flawlessly and with no grammatical mistakes (it might have but you know nobody is perfect)
why did you lock the chapter so early?Why one chapter cost 3 Fast Pass?
Fucking great, I love everything about it, the only downside is that there isn't more of it!
Warhammer for the win!
What more do I have to say to get to this fucking 140 word limit?
Honestly, I prefer this version where they give the protagonist a name more consistent with their selection and not the RAW where for some strange reason the author tries to force the Chinese thing by giving the MC a name that has nothing to do
That's why I hate these Chinese novels where our world is involved, that stupid nationalism is annoying
This is the most unique novel I have ever come across. The author nailed it................................................................................ Hahaha. Need to fill 140.