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The mtl is "The Eldest Martial Sister Gave Up Treatment".Note: I really like the story a lot, until I notice that I need to pay two keys to unlock the chapter. I don't mind supporting the translation of the novel I like, but two keys??? Seriously???
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This is going to have spoilers for up to ch 17. Go away if you don't want to be spoiled. GENERAL SUMMARY:The story begins at a sort of mid point after an event. The MC who is a certified genius at the high school he goes to got beat up by this girl who had no reason to beat him up. (turns out she is his step sister bc his dad is going to marry her mom. He also has a step brother that ain't friendly either) Now the MC discovered that a phone that was stored in their house and forgotten was a relic from ancient ruins that his grandfather helped in excavating. That phone allows him to basically raid dungeons with a game avatar and reviving the avatar only costs a drop of blood. However, all that the avatar collects in the game translates over to reality with benefits. Because of that, the MC keeps on playing that and sleeping so other people think that he got into a slump and gave up on trying. MC obviously proves that he is fine and dandy later on, but somehow no-one seems to be aware of that because his step siblings think he is trash and the other teachers are just unaware. Luckily there isn't too many side character that are rubbish. The step siblings tho... they just suck. OPINION: So I think that this story is worth a read. The MC has an apathy about him that makes him not really care about others except his dad so he sort of just strolls along in life while others seem to care a bit too much about details. However, this makes it really difficult to get a read on the MC, I mean he didn't care that his step brother basically screwed up his chance to be on a really good team for practical examinations. Like the personality of the MC in a phrase would be: calm to the point of being apathetic. The other side characters were reasonable and had common sense in their actions. Step-siblings not really tho. They are just out to make the MC miserable. The general world set up without factions and crap is really similar to shadow hack, modern cultivation stories, and dungeon raiding kind of stories. At a certain point in time, dimensional zones AKA dungeons appeared and monsters came out from those. Humanity adapted to it and now there are special abilities and other cultivation like crap that are present. Currently tho there seems to be no threat of monsters coming out or anything like that. That about wraps up the review.
As a fan of novels that let you turn your brain or live out your power fantasy I still found this novel to be lackluster the writer is not using his genre to his full potential and abuses the simplest shortcuts it provides. The most boring aspect of this novel is the overly blank slate protagonist. Overall it’s a very good concept it just needs iron out in many places this novel reminds me of a story I tried to write but didn’t have enough time for.
Wish this novel was done better but good job to author for getting his work out there
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All hail Scrappy the best and only god in the kingdoms. I need more Scrappy and I neep Scrappy to reconnect with John again before the war starts
This novel has me at the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. I can't wait to start reading. I love to read. This author has a great style
Hey! The book is amazing, I just noticed a small grammar error in chapter one (I stopped when I noticed it because I need to help a fellow author out) when Dio and Rex are entering the bunker and Rex is talking about how it would be a whole new ecosystem if the cave went down farther, his name isn’t capitalized in the sentence after that! Before posting chapters I recommend reading it before you publish it and carefully looking for errors. Anyways I hope you can help me in the future as I helped today! Keep writing you have an awesome talent.
A novel with good potential and mc's character is superb.MC is a smart guy with good life expirience he is such a fit for a cultivation world unlike the wimps.
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