Aliabukarali
notnsurewhattowritesincethisnovelisntreallythatgoodorbadbutdamnisitfuntoseethemcmakeanidiotoutofhimself, seriouslythatmanneedsmoreintelligence
The book is interesting the writer seem to know what he is doing, this is the kind of stories which give me a rest in my busy daysKeep up the work author
Without a doubt the best of the current batch, I really hope it gets chosen....................................................................................
Honestly, between the inaacuracies in the way certain weapons are used in real life and the book, along with IET pretty boring tournament arc history, this book really is not that engaging.
For example, everything so far and implied for the future by the title is going to be combat tournament arcs. No offense but tournament arcs are usually the worst part of any light novel. Authors seem to stick to the formula and i cannot imagine why an author like IET would limit themselves to a story like that, especially when they describe thw characters using weapons in ways that the weapons are not used.
The best example is the Halberd scene where IET describes the warrior stabbing with the point and swinging with the bladed end. This is not how Halberds are used. Its like saying someone shooting a handgun is supposed to hold it sideways like a gangster its inproper and inaccurate.
Halberds are held with two hands and the staff end is used to parry and prod until an opening is made where the combatant can bring the axe/hammer end down.
Put it quite simply the book doesn’t seem all that intresting 42 chapters in so im dropping
This is a 2 and a 1/2 star book but I have to give two 5 stars for update stability and translation quality so tale the score as you will.
this story is like IARS but with less racist comments and a bit more comedic than that. i like the MC and how hard he tries to win over his potential girlfriend. a bit of wish fulfillment but that's ok
Just can't wait for more chapters
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Every thing is good but the sTory development after chapter 10 is so terrible that I almost broke my phone and the whole story was ruined even if everything else was A1
It's a new storyline. n i loved every bit of it. The plotline, the writing style. .Everything is very beautiful n intriguing.. .it got me hooked. .making me desperate for next chapter
Hope this gets picked! If anyone finds the raws please comment them below. This gives me top tier providence, secretly cultivate for a thousand years, and fantasy simulator vibes with a twist. Very hopeful for this novel :D
Support, I just hope there won't be harem, I like this kind of story but will be destroyed once MC became strong and collect girls. Although I like harem too on certain plots but not this one.
I honestly like the story. Everything is good about it. Nothing revolutionary or game-changing but it is interesting. MC and System interactions are smth new and cool. The story is pretty much crack and has nice humour. There are not enough chapters tho. If you want a light read where you won't have to overwork your brain cells definitely recommended. I personally LOVE storeowner stories, most of them are stupid, this one tho is quite cute and fun. Keep up the good work author! <3
