Muito bom .
This is just another "China nambah one" novel. It's a waste of time to read it. It's even hard to understand why Webnovel even translates suck kind of novels.
Anyone know where is our novel trials? did it get cancelled?
Not many sport story can hook me. So congrats. Not only that, i never saw a basketball story so it is a plus.
However, the writing quality suck, but its ok since it is yours first time so i cant go hard on you.
story development is ok but still can be improve and i cant say anything about world background since u use real earth as the background.
All in all, for a first story by new writer, u have good idea for the story and this make up with ur poor writing. i wish you luck.
Very captivating and interesting, not much plot holes at all. Still hungrily waiting for more chapters. Thank you author, for writing a non-human MC novel.
Fantastically ORIGINAL! A refreshing blow(=read) ; amongst others it is damn difficult and hard to stand out...
Least of all be original and unique WHEN in a "theme" or "genre" ,- that has been all but exhausted!
But you (author) and this book stand out 99MM on originality of USEAGE of background materials and your universe "FILL stuff" so to say. NOT that it is fill meant in the normal way of cource.
I originally began on my own novel in 1996... A mix of Gibson, Sterling and Dean Koontz ; in "Linda and Valentine" / "Valeria n and the city of 10.000 planets" setting.
And I find yours to be both EQUALLY as more so versatile in its incorporation of all elements and fundamentals as characters and background as "flavour text" describitions of situations and environment and fellings as emotions :-)
Something is wrong with the privlage system so I'll new chapters are not able to be seen I still see the chapter count rising but maybe they don't know what is happening
Way too slow start, and so much information that is un-needed or uninteresting . You have to slog through 5 chapters to start the story, and by then you're already sick of the story.
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Don't drop pleasss ...
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Harem is God realm
WARGROUNDS is a work of fiction by SilentMild. The audience of this work are fans of games that has battlegrounds, weapons, and powers. As a man born during the 80s, I'm not fond of these kind of game inspiration novels but reading one was kinda fun, I've got to admit.
The major flaw I found was that a ton of characters were introduced right off the start, especially chapter one and chapter two. Repetitive usage of the common dialogue tag, "said" could also be seen throughout. If I were to give a suggestion, it would be best to replace "said" with some sort of emotion to further elaborate the feelings of the characters.
I can't say much, since again, I'm not born in this kind of era. I'm not used to playing these kinds of games, but then again, I enjoyed reading it. As for other flaws, I found some grammar mistakes but they are only a few.
-Dann Giovanni
This is so bad and very cringe to read and every one in this novel is a scum and the biggest of them all is MC.
Well it's my opinion of this novel and some people might enjoy it.