Please choose my work I might be new to this stuff, but I wanted to learn and share my fictional thoughts.I am proud to this work of mine even there were some mistakes there in there, so please be so kind to try to read my work ?
I really love this book, thank you for the chapters and hope for more chapters.
J’ai fini le premier chapitre de le roman, la parcelle et le dévelopement du personnages est fantastique. L’auteur a décrit les relation des personnages clairement et j’aime ton roman.
ocean legend i have the heart of nature is similar to this but it starts different jdjdjddjdjdjdjfjdjfjdddjfjfjfffjjfjfjfjffjfjfjfjffjfjfjjfjfj
I come here to read some relaxing slice of life novel but not to be stressed because of annoying events...now i regretted reading this....
Sorry but I read the first few chapters and this wasn't very good. I sort of like the premise but it doesn't feel like the author wants to take the time to actually think about or write a story. Just look at how it starts. We don't get a chapter about the mc's previous life. We don't get one about him getting his system. We don't get a chapter where he makes a serious attempt to recruit people that wasn't moronic and obviously going to end with cops chasing him (He actually needs a mental hospital if he thought recruiting small children in front of their school was a good idea, regardless of whether his cultivation is real.) We don't get any explanation for why he thought that was a good idea or why he was that desperate outside of what we know from the summary. We don't get any real comedy that wasn't just rehashed from the summary. All we get is
MC tries to kidnap children and doesn't get arrested for some reason
MC laments his incompetence
MC eavesdrops on old man
MC tries to convince old man
Old man agrees out of pity
The premise is fun like I said but it feels like the author is putting the minimum amount of effort into the actual story. I thought maybe it would get better in the next chapter but the author didn't even want to write about the MC finding more students. Instead for some reason the old man calls a bunch of his friends over so that the MC, and more importantly the author, don't have to put even a small amount of effort or thought into that issue. Then in the third chapter the MC gets clones who can cultivate for him so he can continue to put no effort into life. It's like the author's laziness is infecting his character...
Copy paste from bloodscryer's review on NU:
Author's note from Ch. 588, explaining gender confusion due to errors in English fan translations.
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To make a digression, some readers told me that the book has also been translated on the Internet, but there is a big problem, that is, the unified translation of "祂" into "he", and even emphasized in the introduction, which caused it. Many foreign readers are confused.
But in fact, it is more appropriate to use "it".
"祂" is not "他" (he). In China, "祂" often refers to gods.
I would like to explain here. I don’t know if I can see it outside. This is a question of translation.
And when I use "她" (she), every time the protagonist uses the incarnation to descend to the earth, careful readers should be able to find it. Gods always use "祂".
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I have been reading this story from the very beginning. I wasn't too keen on it at first, but the writing became better and I started to enjoy it immensely. Keep up the great work Noona. I truly admire your talent.
Super cute love story! The hero and heroine work great together, and it’s fun to watch them fall in love. The hero’s friends are adorable and super funny.