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Author here! Almost 200 chapters.
New readers may think that this story is about the MC chasing a villainess girl and then they fall in love. Well, that's how it sounds, right? However, it's not... It's about pain and how to deal with the pain... When the whole multiverse wants you and your loved ones dead. When you get caught in an insane plot and it can drive you insane... Then from the insanity, you search for the right answer. The story has a more complex take on the theme, with an extremely smart and omniscient antagonist. Well, it might not even be in the theme anymore. More like sarcasm. Moreover, the MC himself learns and evolves, mentally and physically. It's gruesome... The adventure is full of painful experiences... Loss and a lot of thinking, and more thinking... There seems to be no perfect answer... There are always unexpected twists Far from a romantic story. If you read you will know how complex the story is... I know that the earlier chapters were pretty average, even a bit boring, but if you manage to read up to chapter 130+, you will understand why this story is worth it!
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The writing quality and development could be inproved updates need inprovment on background aswell as character design not bad cherten parts of the chapter could be vastlyinproved
The novel is still at its early stages, but I enjoy already the flow of the story. It maybe because it has a slow pace plot the reason that I enjoyed it, but I really like novels that has battles and strategies in place.
My favorite novel of them all. Fantastic piece . My only concern is the release of one chapter every 12 hours.I hope something can be done about it.At least release of 3 new chapters a day instead of 2 would help
repetitive, boring, sexist for no apparent reson. read something else...
first of all, it's a gorey story, so not for the faint of heart. The story is written in a way that it really captures your attention; it is immersive. The dialogues aren't just there to fill paper but are actually enjoyable. The main character has his own complexities but has never strayed from the path he's chosen.This isn't time pass material, you'll have to really sit down for this one. All in all, I recommend it to the lovers of antagonistic/cold blooded MCs.
This novel is the best among other Africa fiction fantasy and magic novels I don't have much to say for now till the novel if fully developed and completeI will recommend for others to read this novel
Noice
Whil Chen Luoyang may possess a demon. I posses the ability to go stay up long enough to read this all overnight. It seems cool, but I’ll have to wait like two weeks to get enough fast passes...
In the first chapter or so, there is a slight turn off with MC propaganda. I stuck it out until chapter 10 and discovered that the story picks up. However, our MC is slightly crazy and is a supposed genius. I feel that lowered character development, but the story in itself is interesting with a player system but with the players being akin to the supernatural. It's a pretty good read, but with some face palming moments.
So far the novel has great potential. I like how you show their emotions. Both of your novels are great to read.
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