Yeah no.
This is really bad.
Imagine having the technology to fold space and watching life feeds of a human being left behind. Not just you but billions of people are watching. Not a single one of them tries to contact the person, you don't care, sexual innuendos are more important.
I really don't care if this novel gets better at a later point, the start is so bad that even webnovel should be ashamed of this garbage.
Give credit where credit is due. I came with low expectations and was blown away by this work. Now my expectations have been raised so high that I'm not sure the author can keep meeting them. Then again, if he is who I think he is, that shouldn't be a problem.
Got to chapter 64 now. The “supposed” start. I don’t mind lengthy explanations, so no problem in taking your time world building. The writing quality (grammar and structure) is good.
Bad parts I really don’t enjoy and might make me drop:
-The space out of the MC because he is talking with himself and forgets he is actually interacting with another character.
- The length of the chapters is reduced to a point where I’m pretty sure it’s the bare minimum one can consider a chapter (around the second volume it starts happening, probably to make you unlock more?
- The trying to be funny but simply annoying AI. If this is the same in following chapters for me it’s the worst of all the negative things. It’s supposed to help, not annoy or prank.
- There is a part that the author had to step in and announce it is not Plot Armour. Maybe the special ability, not 100%, but maybe. But the animal companion with the lions memory? Really?
-For now that’s all, I’ll redo if I change my opinion. For better or worse.
My main complaint is the writing quality… sometimes it’s hard to understand what’s happening in the story… the author should find someone to edit his chapters as soon as possible… other than that it might be good… though the mc seems a little naive for someone with future knowledge.
This story could be quite tasty as Boxxy T. Morningwood would say. The only problem it has is that from chapter 30 to 40 it seems like a robot was writing it, checking events off of a checklist as it plugs in different names and places. Overall I'm still willing to give this story a chance as long as the following chapters aren't copy and paste like chapter 39-40
I like this novel but since it from Faloo i can only give it 3 stars
very interesting book , nice plot and interesting characters . I can't wait to see how the story progress . Please more updates , more updates
This story is very compelling but I have this urge to help the author with his grammar or at least help him proofread this story!
This is a great novel but it would be much better with a little more touch of grammatical sense.
Author if you’re reading this review, I will 100% proofread your story and fix any grammar errors.
If you need extra hands, I’ll bring my buddies over to help!
this novel is a hidden gem.
Firstly, I feel the sense of character and personality of the Mc and Even side characters are well throughout, and each behave and converse in the way one would expect them to considering their circumstances and status.
And for the Second point, Although there weren't many chapter so far, the pacing and content is done very well and does leave you expecting more withought giving the sense of boredom.
The novel does not feel rushed and the story moves forward in a steady but enjoyable pace.
the writing quality is top-notch, with no grammar errors.
love reading this novel so far.
Early in the novel the mc straight up enslaves a woman because she's strong in the future. Needs a slavery tag as I wouldn't have bothered to read the chapters I did if it had it. I also wonder if these reviews are fake or everyone who reads this is just okay with the mc performing a soul enslavement on an innocent woman.
please can u post the whole 400 chapter here , I beg u author-nim
i am disappointed. the author lied to me saying that the duplicated chapters were a platform error.I had my suspicions and after all this time without updates I am sure.the author allowed the purchase of privileged chapters without any content purposely duplicating chapters to generate volume.