I read until chapter 119, and I can't help but give a 5 star review. while I don't cry a lot, the author knows exactly what it feels like to be a broken person. I know you can do everything you want with your story, but Please make it a not so sad end for the protagonist. You know exactly what I mean, even if real life isn't that great, dreaming about a happy alternative should still be allowed. Thank you for showing what it is like to be unable to connect with others on an emotional level.
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Please keep the novel uppp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Enjoy reading it ^^
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Me encanta esta historia, siendo que la selección de historias de Starcraft es muy limitad, pero la continucación de toda la trama es excelente por parte del autor.
Ademas que el desarrollo en si de las cosas con las facciones del sector Kropulu es tal como se ven en el juego siendo hostiles uno con el otro hasta que puedan trabajar en conjunto.
A highly enjoyable story to read, where the narrative stands out for its meticulous attention to detail in describing scenes and actions. Everything suggests that this work holds immense potential, a spark that will undoubtedly soon transform into a burning and brilliant flame!
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has legendary mechanic vibes but it is it's own original novel. it's worth the read and is interesting . I need to fill up characters wawawawa
shameless review! Join Dave on his journey to rescue the girls trapped as side characters and bring them into the folds of reborn to play the game!
Reading the first 5 chapters, I want to point out something.
Jake Lin, a defected human who can't use his right hand but is a genius at mathematic. It seem like everything was normal as he got home to see his older sister, playing that popular game and possibly became a professional gamer.
Then it all went spiral and out of control when she decided to use some code which caused a huge disaster and Jake Lin became unconscious, only to wake up with a "system".
So far, this storyline is intriguing and kept me interested but one flaw thing about this novel is the formatting.
It got a little bit difficult to understand when the conversation is jumbled up in one paragraph. I suggest the author to separate the paragraph into 1-2 sentences for us reader to read it clearly and not get confused.
I wished to say more but so far with only 5 chapters out, I can only wait for more to see the development and how Jake Lin will utilize his system to benefit him such as, getting rid of the handicapped status.
The first two chapters show a world dog eat dog that we are used to seeing in xianxia novels. The novel's mc is a kind and good guy that knows what is to be weak in a world where the strongest can kill the weakest without be arrested or suffer something. I liked the first two chapters and I want to read more, you can make a good novel if you keep the hard work