interesting start
A very stressful novel... Don't get me wrong, The novel is not bad. It's surprisingly good BUT very had a heavy atmosphere within it ... The MC barely has any rest or relaxing time throughout the first 150-Chapters I read... The Major cause of this is his three identities.The others in the novel can't be measured easily as side characters or supporting characters or even background characters... The roles change so fast and unpredictably... Mr. author is not taking it easy on us whenever we feel that everything is okay and we can predict the next step a completely different scenario play for us and we become more confused... The MC has no real goal or plans just a collection of dangerous events and a war between his brain and his heart ... AGAIN it's very stressful and you absolutely shouldn't read it casually. The world is complicated and vague without any in-depth knowledge about it until it's become relevant to the MC.The only thing I feel for the MC for those +150 chapters is how miserable his life... no matter what fortune he chanced upon it, he always in very depressing situations.
Aparte de algunos errores de ortografía y gramática, esta novela es una de las mejores novelas para una lectura ligera. No quiero agregar spoilers para arruinar la diversión y solo puedo decir que no te arrepentirás.
First time I'm reviewing a novel. All in all, I live this book. There's little grammar errors that doesn't take away from understanding what's happening. The concepts used so far are interesting.
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This is actually a nice gamer story, one of the points is that [gamer body] and [gamer mind] weren't nerfed, they where removed so there could actually be some kind of struggle. Anyway onto the review.1-Writing Quality: The quality is good and there's some grammar stuff happening but too few to notice outright, it's has a pleasant writing. I'd give full mark if some of the chapters didn't feel short and others got long because of times, yes it's flavor but if you skip it it becomes short again.[4 Stars Here]2-Story Development: We'll this one is kind of a 50/50 right now, I guess I could consider the MC spontaneous, yes he does have plans but he gets side tracked sometimes(happens often) but it doesn't change the flow of the story it just leaves more questions and build up on pause(body snatcher self-made quest).[3 Stars Here]3-Character Design: The characters are well made, even some minor role characters like OG body's mom. Although the MC does act his physical age (He acts grown up for his age but also acts not so grown up most times) so there's that, I don't really have complaints here besides a few minimal things.[4 Stars Here]4-Updating Stability: What is stability? From the history we can see that also month updates where happening but now? yeah that's not happening.[3 Stars]5-World Background: The world is detailed and has some level of information regarding the scenes and those around it, we get a mild view of where the MC lives in early chapters overall it's good.[4 Stars Here]Opinion: The book is definitely a must read, for me as in the good must read but to some it might be a must read to know what not to read?.For the [No Harem] lovers you can be happy it's not a Harem, and for the Harem lovers... SO FAR IT'S NOT, honestly I don't picture the MC dating right now but if he does he could make a harem work or a single one work just as fine and I hope P1 is a love interest.
It starts out okay with an intresting premise but it’s ruined by the nationalism. I’m guessing the author got in trouble for not having enough nationalism so he went overboard. A character who is a foreigner is suddenly stated to have seven-eigths bloodline from the nine provinces (China) out of nowhere. Im guessing this might be because having a genius not from China is a big no-no. It later states this is why the headmaster accepted him as a student and he wouldn’t have otherwise. The main charcter’s feats are repeatedly stated to show how glorious they were with 5000 years of history. This is mentioned so many times I usually just skim a few paragraphs when it comes up. The patriotism would be fine if it weren’t for the author degrading other countries to make China seem superior.
This story started off pretty promising with interesting characters. unfortunately this story suffers really hard from having a million female characters to balance. they all eventually become a one dimensional horny character that thinks almost of nothing else other than sex and semen. All the "conflict" he had is very short lived and mc characters has a serious wuxia syndrome being really overpowered. None if his powers does not feel earned and its just a really overindulgence male sex fantasy. its a real shame it turned out like this.
The MC is the type of character that falls directly into my "move on to next novel" territory. My score is unfortunately based on my experience of having just read Solo Levelling & Rise of a Porter and I really enjoyed them. I commend the hard work but the moments where something pivotal is about to happen so it immediately cuts to a different scene and the slow pace was very jarring so I only made it to chapter 23. I'm the type of person where if nothing has grabbed my attention and I'm up to chapter 20? It's definitely a no
Started with a different work of the author's. Subtle recommendation for RMW. Jumped to DD. Binged the whole story within a few hours. Was it worth it? Yes. Would I recommend someone else to do the same? Also, yes. Will you enjoy reading an author bemoan the consequences of his success? I did. Will contribute to his suff- *cough* *cough* success? Yes.
Story has a great MC. World slowing being built, and is leaving very realistic, yet fantastic situations to take place. Supporting cast is having foundation slowly being set, but not a whole lot is being told or described about them besides a little about his best friend and the female lead.
Author has an awesome portfolio to show his character writing, so if nothing else, the interactions between characters will draw you in. Not a lot of story written so far, but I look forward to his continued success.
Give it about 5 chapters if you aren't feeling sure after the first.
Respect the Game. Persist to the End.
Good job author, you improved chap after another, great story with amazing writing style, i loved the mc and your descriptions.
The plot was well written and your knowledge made great touch to the chapters keep up the good work
nice story, hope for more. thank you.