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An interesting book, and a new approach on the chatgroup type stories. fights are interesting, and I'm always waiting for the story to unfold in the new chapters. maybe as a warning that the mc has some hidden power in him that we don't know much about, but seems a OP. (casting tier 5 magic when the guy is tier 0)
Sorry guys, I will be on hold for about 3 weeks. I am on a field exercise with my unit. I will try to write as much as possible in between and come back with a mass release. So sorry for the break.
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I personally like this novel and even though I didn’t manage to read to the end, I cant stop myself from giving my review first!!Firstly, love romance pace wise— I do admit its fast but if you compare it to reality, there are even those who jumped to conclusion of marriage and they only get to know each other for 1-2 months only! So in my relative term, it’s at a good pace. But since not everyone prefers fast romance and author is always looking out for their readers’ thoughts and reviews, then i suggest the author to adjust however they seem fit. Secondly, author need to calm themselves down before publishing. I’m not saying it in a bad way. It’s okay to compile but be sure to double check your work as there are mistakes in few paragraphs and sometimes it gives out different meaning that readers would not be able to understand. Lastly! Thank you author for sharing this novel with me. I felt at ease and calm now after reading this! It really really caught my attention and you got a subscriber! Aka collector! I’m looking forward to the future updates and your future works author!!!!
This is wonderful, best story I've read this year. ??????. can't wait to see what happens. I'm so loving the progression More chapters please.
Hi! I'm the author of this story. First, Welcome all readers to the world of Undisclosure. The scifi/fantasy series consists of 4 books and I have finished all in my mother language so don't be scared if I will drop because it's not gonna happen. The English version is on process. I try translating at my best. Moreover, feel free to give me feedback by comment or reviews, I love to hear!More news about my novel and illustration, please follow my FB page, Twitter, and IG @Jesjournal90
Rough around the edges, but overall it's interesting enough to give readers a good read.The world building could've been great, but the author gives us confusing infos, there're gods, but how many? What do you get from a convenant with a God? What kind of instrument are there? What are the effect of each instrument? The system/levels? Are some questions that might surface when you read this novel.Character-wise they're great, the emotion of each meeting and separation could be felt easily.Plot-wise is already good coupled with the world building.Honestly, the lore/world is interesting if you could spare a few braincells to visualize this story as a blank paper. Just imagine the world, by each word, don't put in any visualization you might have from cultivation novels. Think of this one as a western novel.
A very nice story overall, but the MC is too conceited, he has the power but decides to play and that will and has always cost him a lot of which I never expected from a man who reincarnated….he acts too childish most times
MC is op, adapts fast , knows his way around women , good plot line , story spans across many worlds which is very good , has harem which is excellent overall nice novel but why are there no updates for this novel Author ???
I have wanted to read books so I am reading this book because it it really good. And you don't know when something is good until it is gone. When I first started to read you book it took me on an adventure. I love to read books and it made me want to make my own books someday. I don't when I will do it but I will. I not not stop reading books.Some people say you are a bookworm becauses you love to read books. But who but those people who say that we are bookworms it is not a bad thing. We just love to read books. I am going to put some of my own books up soon I hope the best for you. I Love to read book every day and I will not stop reading. See you.
Need more chapters and mass releases....I don't what to say exactly but this book really nice and worth reading.... Author only one request.....More chapters.... Please.....