I thought I'd get tired of this since it doesnt follow the usual xianxia trope but I haven't. It is humor galore interspersed with more humor.
This novel is amazing!!! ..............................................................................................................................................................
its start with a good story good hero good Developing till ch 210 when he let athena slaps him and he do nothing and then he let her to live . and then she betrayed him 2 the developing after he destroyed the city its not that much i am in ch 306 and I'll leave this novel caus I'm Disappointed
Aittle bit of info dump at the start but it does improve a whole lot later. Few grammatical mistakes here and there but the story is interesting. I'm very interested in the parent's relationship. It sounds quite cute. I wouldn't mind a few slice of life chapters of them just living their lives everyday. Good work Author!
I really liked the new concept of the novel and enjoyed it but the the family part ruined it, that part was really irritating so I am dropping it at 175This novel reminded my of immortal wine store that one was better than this
Maria's Guild House,
Few chapters yet i am hooked in this story already! The ancient times value the strength of the man but this story is different. I will follow the adventure of the two swordswomen.
Never have read an isekai which parodies itself in such a humorous way.
I don't know why author always leaves novel midway.i started enjoying author's novel but after some time author just leaves the novel for months without any chapters..
most important is the desperate need for a EDITOR !!!! bit of interesting story. I'm about 120chps in I would love to see this book through to its end .the bad Grammer and sentence structures make it hard to read
Wow, really interesting read! The story has a really cool concept and super interesting premise! The writing is also good, and the details help to build the scene and the character dialouge as well, are more than good! There are few grammatical errors and sometimes confusing sentence structure, but other than that, this was really interesting and super well edited! I recommend this story to readers looking to dive into a mysterious interesting world the author has set up! Keep up the good work author, :)!
author make more chapters I'm begging u this is one of the best novels I've readplz author plz.............................................