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Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating
Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating
Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating
Good Great Amazing Fantastic Fascinating
It has an amazing idea but the writing is kinda lacking something, and at the same time it has everything it needs ,but I feel like the execution is what is done wrong. Overall I recommend it its a good pass time.
Well everyone, if you see one you had seen all..
This is one of those "I can see hints" series. Where instead of hints, it actually answer mate. Hint and answer is different. But I wouldn't judge, you can call it whatever you like..
We had read about ocean.. Tunnels... And now, island..
Very very well written. Love the zombies descriptions. The vocabulary and grammar are spot on. The plot is epic but most of all, the character growth is really well done! Excellent novel!
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Barely made it through the first chapter. A boring slog with little to know worlduilding or meaningful story. So repetetive I felt like i was in a time loop.
I am currently only at chapter 13 but the story is a really good one! At first it seems like a normal MC is weak but gets strong story but this novel is somehow different! A must read!!
Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry.
so -the TL is badthe plot is stupid, punching a hole in a painting cause he won't give it to you, ffs, even toddlers dont do thati dont know where it will even go, it could have been him telling stories or teaching skills, would have been bad but readable cause the author isnt very clever but i would put up with it, instead its utter garbage...
It's a nice book and would like to read it to the end ,but why isn't it updated anymore?All in all an op main Charakter who goes around the world to seek his weapons
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A pretty darn entertaining concept, no glaring grammar faults tho people can always strive to be better over time in how they word and construct sentences.Anyway, I'm not here to break apart every sentence, the story is fun and lighthearted, I even chuckled a bit during the opening chapter.If you want something fun then give this one a shot ^-^
