Author why do you go and use your right hand until chapter 111 and then u can see your slow development of your novel? Or u can ask for your mother's help? U have guts to say that your novel will be better after chapter 100 with only 97 characters online?
top tier well written masterpiece, thanks author for this piece of art, the applications and their functions must have required alot of thought and ingenuity.
Interesting story and do your best to improve grammar, if this is first time writing basically always poor at grammar but it can be improved and make sure the plot getting interesting for next
Bee so good novel, and bee-love it. When they have a baby i wonder?
The story is not consistent. In the first chapter it is mentioned that the MC and his sister are ordinary people without any talents. Though the MC's turned out to be true, the sister is talented in archery. Even the technology of the world is inconsistent. It is mentioned that there are cars and planes. But the MC travelled in carriage in 1 chapter. The names are also not to my liking. Go with western completely or chinese completely.
I was not able to go past chapter 30 with that many plot inconsistencies.
Like the title and picture the story is good so far so keep it up and the wish was cool along with the background that you made up. This novel will become a great novel in the future
Bro made the book free?? Instant 5 stars and if I find any spelling error I will comment under them (ty for being a goat)
Added to collection as it is recommended by WN.
1) uses themes and elememts from different books/videogames. Really disgusting how he is butchering their stories to be put in his. Lazy.Unimaginative.
I love this author’s Star Wars stories. If this reads like another one, then it’s because it is a r
I write just because I love to and this is one of my favorite piece but before reading let me warn you,you might get addicted.
I really like this novel because its really well written. I gave it a try until it was time to drop it. The character design really got on my nerves, I HATE harems but I gave this one a pass because the world building was so amazing. But when the author started throwing in those god awful tropes of the MC falling into harem member no.2's breast, I metaphorically rolled my eyes so hard they fell out. After getting near to chapter 46 and finding myself getting more and more irritated at the MC's naive antics, I thought to myself would I pay to read this book if I'm already not finding this book as fun, That answer would be a RESOUNDING HELL FREAKING NO!!!