The story starts off pretty well, doing a good job of introducing the plot and some characters (that at least feel real and have some depth) as well as relevant information about the world. I noticed a few errors in writing, be it tense or singular / plural mistakes, this could be an issue with translation(?)
A System Story! So far, it's just been a few chapters but the hook and twist are well written. Makes me want to read more, and it is enjoyable to read.
The MC is very well developed as well. Hopefully this book will grow on me as the author releases more in the future [img=recommend]
This is one of the best necromancer novels that I had come across. Man, the character development, world background, spells and the artifacts. I just simply love everything about this novel.
Chapter 40 loving the progress however it’ s a shame we have to wait for future chapters to be released daily the author done a fantastic job on this novel so far
soo hard to read.. it's all over the place.. concepts aren't really clear.. MC suddenly gets a sniper rifle and it's not clear how he got it.. some people are saying in comments that he went abroad n used his personal space to get it.. but there's no mention of it at all..One guy is killed in the game n when he's out he's driving his car all of a sudden.. and he immediately re-enters the game still driving.. how did he end up driving the car when he was in the game? or does the car detect he's in a game n drives itself? nothing mentioned.. there's no time stop or something n user has to wear a vr helmet to play n all.. there's other stuff like mc walks into a gym to test this strength.. coach seeing his form is wrong corrects it.. seeing MC is strong he immediately asks if he wants to become a coach.. even though all he got is strength.. MC rejects it.. n that's it.. nothing else.. only reason I can imagine why the author wrote those 3-4 paras is to make fun of other novels where MC does join a gym which is kinda stupid..Real world is even more ambiguous.. MC enters the game at night n is out by morning.. what does he do during the daytime? go to work? go to college? nothing.. he eats meat from the game.. exercises.. re enters the game.. all I can get from this is that MC takes an entire day to eat n go for a run..MC goes to his village all of a sudden to defeat his friend/neighbour as he became stronger.. then that friend guards his house when MC is playing the game.. nothing else..Basically everything is all over the place.. written very poorly.. n half done.. upon that translation is really bad making it even harder to read.. overall it's simply unpleasant to read.. a complete waste of time
Definitely 5 stars rating for such a good ol' novel with such a good ending.Many good novel have dissapointing ending but Heavenly Dao Rankings did it good.A troupe that MC strong from the start until the end didn't ruin the pace of the story.
Inconsistent at the start of the story you will get confused but only for a few chapter as the story progressed the mc background and character will be explained. So far no major plot armor or cringe mc. MC is hot blooded good type
This book is amazing I need moreeeeee......a **** give him a dragon and a grim ripper summoning dammit
And give him a monster magician too hahahaha
Yoo if you keep on writing this well, you can make some good money on here! Keep it up author!
cry your mom out Thoughs of god in a detection of the brain of God who is not the best person you can do to be to a woman in the world and be to a shiny woman
I have never been into this kind of stories before so I thought that I would leave it hanging from the first chapter but once I started reading it, I was proved wrong. To put it simply, this book was very interesting and.. original! It was well thought of. The character design, the story development and all the other details screamed 'Get hooked on me!' So, hats off to our talented author!
Good book and the writing quality good but still there are a few mistakes ? correct them ..................................................