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It is a good read. but's it's a bit hard to follow because of the misuse and misplacement of phrasing and words. Aside from that it was a pretty well developed story, I actually rather enjoyed it.
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will be very dissapointed if this isnt picked.
Honestly i was here just because the Mc was a sworld wielder and he was OP as hell. Personality wasnt that great but bearable.At chp 70 you just **** those things.The rape scene got rewritten but even than mc is suddenly weak as fk and this made me drop the novel.If this novel had a quality above other novels i might have overlooked but honestly its subpar with aaaaalot of novels in this genre i was here just as i said above, OP MC and Sworldsman.Good luck
Thank you for the amazing story. I love the detail and the hints of insanity! Im interested in seeing how the plot develops. I can’t wait for what happens next!
heyo crazy cronie here,review on 27/04/2021 @chap289 (released chap till date: 295)review divided in: Short reviewLong review with ratingsIMOConclusionWarning (includes spoilers) SHORT REVIEW: Pure gold! One of the best modern harem out there! And also my review is based on the previous novel, though i dont think anything really changed.LONG REVIEW: writing: 8.5/10 Few grammatical errors were there. Many might also not like the first person perspective (though this novel really did great, and i dont think third person perspective will suit this novel)update: 10/10This is newly updated, and the author promised 7/week. For me 7 per week is good for original novels.plot: 8.5/10 Sometimes plots are repetitive, but then again this is day to day life of a seemingly 'normal' high school student. So yeah repetitions are allowed!Harem? One of the best harem story i read. Yeah sometimes it feels too rushed (especially few girls in the later chap which i din like) but yeah you can't deny the satisfaction you feel sometimes when mc and the girl get together after 100s of chapters.World building... There really is nothing.. the world, till now just revolves around few places.characters: 9/10With such a big harem, i will just say author did great job in giving most of them 'real personalities'. Most of them have their own thoughts and ambitions. Even the male side charas has different personality, i really loved this thing about the novel.pacing: 8.5/10 Slow! Let me repeat once again... This is a story of a highschool boy's daily life.Yeah so authors takes the chance to explain the whole day. Sometimesnit even takes 30 or so chapters for a day, but i personally dont mind it.dialogues: 8/10At the beginning it was a little pale. Every character seemed to talk in similar manner but later chapters author really improved, and one can notice the changes.entertainment: 10/10This is a novel you can't get bored... This is a biased scoringOverall: 4.5/5 IMO:Maybe, sometimes getting a different character's view point will just be awesome (as long as it doesn't affect the plot.) CONCLUSION:An amazing harem novel! 30 chapters are enough to hook you! I am not talking about harem haters, but even if you are just ok with harem then do give this novel a try!WARNING: *SPOILER (not exactly)*- Sometimes little bit on the darker side.- No females who have joined the mc have any visible problems with him (tho they tend to get jealous many times.)
I just feel like there is no realism to the story in-terms of the man character and the worldHe just accepts that on dead he is transported, resurrected/given a new body and a system with no questions, surprise, etc.He first becomes aware in this new world in front of a dragon like giant lizard but then the lizards exist is completely ignored There just seems to be not detail or realism in the story at all.. I known it fantasy + system and all but collecting a 120 body strengthening fruits in a few hours and easily becoming level 20 with plenty to spare but a local harvester/collector is only level 2, why??I'm not saying I can do any better or trying to dishearten the author I just think there is so much in this story where you just think how did 5 paragraphs of necessary story telling get reduced to 2 sentences.This is the fist time I have written a negative review but it just seems like the author has a good idea but they really need to go back and re-write the story from the start and add in more details about the world and about the MC's thought processi.e why would in think he is safe after reaching level 21 given that he did it in a few hours of arriving by simply eating a few fuits. I mean has he used his appraisal like skill on some of the animals, is he just stupid and natural arrogant/delusional. I mean its the same as a normal guy going to 1 karate lesson and leaving he is now a master fighter.well if you have read to hear in my rant good on youP.S. if you are the author and you actually bother to read this I hope you take this as the constructive criticism I tried to make it.
I love evolution novels. I especially adore them when the main character is an animal (monster) and doesn't care about humanity. If you are like me, you will adore this romance .
HONESTLY WOW. not a lot of times you get adaptations from African culture and mythology in this platform especially, curiosity lead me into opening the book, and the tools irl have been beautifully utilised by Sam, wish this were a book, pretty darn different concept, but you gotta read it carefully and find time because THE DETAILS MATTER the author hints it (or maybe I'm trynna analyse too implicit details lol)
Só pela outra novel do autor eu já sei que isso vai ser bom, sério o autor tem uma habilidade incrível pra escrever, suas obras merecem pelo menos o top 5 ranking
Outstanding Introduction to Characters, Zero Grammar mistakes, Strong-spirited female mc, arrogant yet dashing male detective. since the start of the first chapter I haven't stopped reading until I reached chapter 4 just to give this positive review. I haven't read any much Thriller but this sure packed a punch to my mind, Keep up the good work, your novel is amazing