PumpkinKing10
It's quite good. Just reading it seems like I am reading the journey of a mortal to immortality novel. Their's pattern and cultivation system is the same.
just dont drop it has everything i want so plz dont drop i recommend everyone to read it once or give it a try i am sure it wouldnt dissapoint you .....................................................................................................................................................
I am in love with these book, it was awesome♥️♥️. Please update vol 4 fast
-Other Side Guild Hall-
Bae Seoyeon looked at the stacked boxes that were almost taller than her. She was slightly petrified with the number of boxes she needed to handle.
It’s a great book definitely recommend it
The main character is immortal as well as a warrior as foreshadowed on the cover art. So some OP aspects are to be expected from a long lived warrior. This author has the potential to produce a standout original story, much more so than other stories on this app. If you're tired of OP MC with a cheating system, cultivation, transmigration, reincarnation theme. This novel is a breath of fresh air and deserves some recognition as such. Happy reading. ?
The story seems interesting enough from what I've read, however the author clearly needs an editor and someone who can help him with overall sentence structure. This clearly isn't the authors first language however there is potential in the novel, he just needs someone to brush up the errors he's made, as long as someone can help him with editing then I see potential for the novel.
Rating it low since there really is not much development tbh and the ratings seem to be inflated. 17 chapters in and there is one small paragraph talking about making buttons. every other chapter here was him fucking every single woman he has come across. maybe you should change the description and title of the novel. perfectly fine with ***** scenes since i am actually reading the harem sect novel but when almost the entire novel is filled with *** there is really nothing much to read....
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Good and funny novel, but the release rate is atrocious. I'd recommend reading regardless, but don't get too attached. It may take several months for a new chapter.
The synopsis is well explained and described for me... The main character is awesome and strong... The plot is not too fast not too slow just the right one... Keep it up ....
