Empersea9zi
This is stupid if the author didn't have anything than don't release anything yet having 3 chapter with the same thing "chapter in progress" is missing leasing my the chapter title and very annoying.
a very high-quality novel with multiple folds and levels in it. It starts off as ordinary cliche novel but turns into something amazing and unbelievable.
This is a good read for a while. The writing quality, I think it's fine. Story Development and Characters are also good and great. I will surely look forward to more.
Maybe someone will like it, but I did not appreciate the book. After reading the synopsis, I expected to see a book with serious characters and a story, but in the end I got a collection of not the most interesting jokes. Indeed, the synopsis talks about humor, but I did not expect such a presentation, where every f***ng sentence is a joke.
it's good i think but if you want to attract more people from reading this you should change the cover, the current cover is off putting to be honest.
I just finished reading this book and it is awesome. I hope u come back. I really like the hole plot and everything.. there are a couple things I would change but but its awesome for the most part. If you wont come back to write can you message me I really would like to continue it.. if u dont message me I might just take it anyways and go from where it stopped because it deserves to be finished
Likeable MC that transmigrates to another world that has cultivation, alchemy and other fantastical elements. It is also has a school academy setting....at least for now and a touch of young unrequited love...at least for now. Every so often when I compare it to the actual translated novels on Webnovel, I find it more entertaining and is more prone to vote for it with my power stones. I hope others give this story a chance....Maybe read it for 15 or 20 chapters and hopefully you'll add it to your library to encourage this author to continue on writing this story.
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This is pretty good so far, then MC’s power isn’t too OP, he can see other peoples stats like most other MC’s but I guess he sees a little more. Also he can see if someone else is about to have a huge chance, if it’s either good or bad. Hopefully we can see more chapters uploaded because we barely know about the MC or his progress so far other than his upgraded ability.
copy ANOTHER TRASH STORY
Good story, hope that it sticks around. Looking forward to reading more and seeing how the MC continues to evolve. Hopefully more twists and turns to come!
Great read, really enjoyed it but I probably over-exaggerated in the score. Writing quality is good although there are occasional mistakes.Daily, sometimes two updates a day is very nice, and considering the amount of progression in each chapter I feel it's very fulfilling.Story development isn't amazing, Chapter 87, MC's partner suddenly declares her goal of world conquest?... She wants to progress and gain better status but it was just really random. All in all tho the story is solid, MC and his partner go on adventures inside a video game.Character design is surprisingly good considering a LOT of stories struggle with this. It's easy to imagine gestures and discussions being held with every character and its personality.World background is somewhat worse then the other aspects of the novel but it's not bad it's pretty much a standard fantasy with a rather unique system but it isn't mentioned that much in relation to strengthening MC except for some vague clues to like the fact they glow while using skills. There is 1 kingdom with few characters and places.Great read, enjoyed very much.
