another trash face slapping novel with an enemy who wont die so the mc can face slap him all the time, and it was even an editors picked seriously? is the taste of the editor so low
read this if you want gutted and bastardized version of 借钱节目中，我首富身份被曝光 . i just read few chapters from raw and here to compare, and i must say that i am disgusted by webnovel for stealing a novel, completely gutting it and bastardizing it. this is not translation, this is complete rewrite. thing that were actually explained in raw, were nowhere to be found here. it is like half of the novel is missing, and other half is bastardized to fit western culture... ffs they put bill gates instead of jack ma..
I do like the story but I also wanna know if this is polygamy or no.
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first 2 chapters choices had too many attributes making me think that I wouldn't be able to understand the choices very well.. but later on there's not much of those choice selection.. maybe it's available rarely..
story is as mentioned.. developing his territory.. the cheat basically is like an assistant which gives him answers or helps him make a choice..
currently there's only 25 chapters so can't say much.. so until chapter 25 the story is really nice.. if it maintains similar standards then it would be awesome.. hope it gets selected
When the title is wrong, you know the translator screwed up
Overall is good. You can see the progress why he have that high stats and it's just slow update. Hope the author update more chapters. I'm looking forward to Jun development in Entertainment Industry..[img=update][img=update]
Trial Read Review (only from synopsis):
(X:ICATDOHP) - So the protagonist gets reincarnated with the power to change the dates (how old or young they are) of herbs. He is a herb disciple (good for him) and since plants are more powerful when older, he modifies the plants and consumes them making him stronger. Not going to lie, this plot seems mediocre and bland. Maybe I will check it out.
(YTIBIWBMS) - This is one of those talent stealing novels. That is literally all the synopsis covers and it doesn't really talk much about the plot. There have already been many novels similar to this one and I will only check it out if I am bored.
(ITRWISG) - Basically, the protagonist is in a modern world where he can see stats and stuff like a game while no one else can’t. This plot has been overused so much and usually comes with an extra plate of face slapping. The sad thing is that I’m already full.
(MR) - Out of all of the other trial novels this time, this seems like the one with the most plot and potential. Honestly, I can’t really understand what the plot is because the synopsis is short but it hooks you into the story (somewhat). I will check it out.
(P9Y:AAMFFY) - Protagonist transmigrates into the modern world and gets a funeral system. He also has a funeral company (you can see where this is going). Basically, he can make amazing things happen at your funeral, but that’s all. Unique plot but honestly kind of lackluster. Maybe I will read it.
(LOTP:IRAMSFTS) - Guy can get land and stuff and summon succubi and this plot is overused and seems generic blah blah blah (hey, it’s like 2:00 for me over here, don’t blame me for being sloppy). Anyway, bad. Wouldn’t recommend it.
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Okay, first things first, I'm no author nor am I an expert but as a reader, the grammatical errors and poor sentence structure leads to me being unable to picture the scene.
Even just a quick run through from a fluent English speaker would significantly help, but I feel that without those errors this story will be an interesting read.
Also, I am not sure what the terminology used for this us, but stating who is the current speaker, current POV and seperating different characters' speech.
For example, instead of a paragraph looking like:
"And that's the plan right" "yeah, perfect"
it'd probably be much easier to understand like:
John anxiously questioned Bill for the nth time, "And that's the plan right?"
"Yeah yeah," Bill reassured, "it's perfect."
And also at the beginning of each perspective change label who is talking:
-----John POV-----
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The story seems very realistic , it felt like really happened in front of my eyes , they way of narration is excellent.the author really touched people's heart