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This novel has a good concept and plot (I think it might have). The only problems are the constant errors. Not grammatic errors but text error where some paragraphs don't make sense due to the wording. Author, I have tip that you can use while editing your chapters.First write your chapter and then wait at least 30 min before editing your chapter. Before you wait the chapter ia still fresh in your head so everything makes sense for you. But after you wait you see the things you could have done better. This is why editors are so great. But I assume you can't get an editor so just follow the tip above and you'll be most likely off better.Ps. I got this tip from a experienced author, but I was too lazy to implement this into my novel, although I probably will do it.
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This is a review of chapter 1 since that is all that is currently out. I didn't know what to expect going into this. But in the end, I came out satisfied. From an enjoyment point of view, I think this story has a lot of potential right off the bat. I am curious to see how the two will grow their relationship. And I NEED to know more about what lies in the astral state. Those entities are set up to be great threats so you better bring out their full horror!From a grammatical point of view. I think it's nearly perfect as is. The only thing I could be picky about is some small grammar points like punctuation and spelling. Some words could've also been used better but it still is fully comprehensible. I think proofreading once or twice will make this the best up-and-coming story!
I dont get it he dies goes back to past but in another similar world and just dousn't even remember, care, or question the well being of his original parents and keeps thinking about on revenge against people who killed him but those people are not them this is not the same world
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I can see that Bai Li is going to be the FL wifey. they would be so adorable together I cannot wait to see if there is going to be romance between the two of them
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I like the story I just whish it would hurry up and get to the good bits the story hints at. Thankyou for the good story that has gripped me from the start.