English is not my mother languaje but here we go, i hope its readable.This is a novel that could have gone big, but became bad.The world in itself seems interesting but...I can understand that you want to make an OP mc. Okey good, but if you do it, do it with logic. Make a progression so the readers can enjoy how he gets OP. The way is done here is too fast, no development at old. Feels rushed.Many cliches used in a bad way, it feels forced and boring.The mc is supposed to be reincarnated from an old man, i cant feel any maturity in his way of thinking.Even with all this issues i congratulate the author for keep going with the novel.Its not my cup but if you enjoy it keep going.
Hi everyone, this is cele, the translator of this novel~About the synopsis, it's translated from raws, so I'll be leaving the author's synopsis up. TL's synopsis will be here for now.Qingyun Zi was betrayed and murdered. Just when he thought that everything was over, he wakes up in a new body, the body of a silkpants named Ye Yuan.As he embarks on a new life, he struggles to cope with the loss of loved ones as well as accept his new identity.Unresigned to his fate, Ye Yuan resolves to make his way back to the top while hiding his identity from his old enemies as he plots his revenge. How did he revive? Will he be exposed and die with countless regrets? Was there a mastermind behind all this?With all these questions and more in his heart, Ye Yuan resolves to seek out answers as he uncovers a darker plot behind all this . . .This is a short spoiler free (I hope) review from me. While some people will be turned off by the genre, or because they read a few chapters of MTL, I'll just state maybe two major selling points for me which differentiates this novel from the other eastern fantasy novels out there.Firstly, as the title suggests, alchemy plays a major role in this novel. While many novels also have alchemy, the MC's life basically revolves around alchemy here, which is different from how alchemy is normally considered an auxiliary skill. The MC here views it as much more, which he also proves later on in the novel (multiple times).Rather than mindless fighting, I like a novel that touches more on the other aspects.Second, and I feel that this is by far the biggest selling point for me. THE MC IS NOT A HOMICIDAL MANIAC! He doesn't go like: "Hey you, you had a lewd face when looking at my wife no. 69, I'll kill your entire family and revive your ancestors to kill them as revenge. Then, I'll extinguish all karma threads tied to you, killing everyone that even remotely knows you!"AND THE BAD GUYS HERE ARE NORMAL!! They don't go around killing people for some stupid reason. They worry about repercussions from going overboard! These people weren't dropped on their heads as a baby like those arrogant mass murderers who will slaughter entire cities because someone looked at them funny. They are actually people that you can like! To me, it's like a breath of fresh air from those madmen in AST or MGA.Yeah, so, a good story is about delivery rather than the idea anyway. So don't skip it just because of its genre.I won't go any further in detail to prevent spoilers. Just drop me a message on webnovel discord if you have any questions. I'm online on discord often.*shameless 5-star reviews for myself.
What is up with this?! Everytime I start reading something with an 8yr old, there's some creepy weird sexual or romantic tension with an older woman...this is super awkward and gross...the MC is 8!!! even if he is much older at heart, his physical body is still 8!!!! yuck!!!
ALL HUMAN PLEASE READ THIS! This is why we have the word idiot in every language. Also the premise of doctor with stupid system is so stupid, I guess only stupid people read this, oh wait the doctor is handsome, so handsome in fact many woman read the stupid story and make low score review in other novel because they want this stupid story come faster. Reason of the stupid story got 4 star: stupid woman who also crazy read this stupid story + troll. Word stupid I use in this review: 10How stupid is this? Amazingly stupid.
I like the way author develop character. MC childish and naïve mindset tempered by world setting. This is not a story of righteousness. This is a story about MC journey to accomplish what he want. Everything explained rationally. Inspirational story.
You're the best writer ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I would love to recommend others also to read the story...
So excited for another of your books! Your stories always transport me and paint such a vivid picture. Can't wait to see what you have in store as this continues :D
good story so far.
This book is so boring and nothing new. The author has 0 creativity! The story revolve around the main character, going to new places to level up, kill all the enemies and move on! The story line is so bad it will shock you for 3days and 3nights! (Often use my the author)
Yaaayyy thankyou soooo much author thx a lot for updating here.
love it. cant wait to see what happens