Good start, to see in time. The chapters come out often, they are quite short but that is not a problem
I have 14 to 15 chapters and basically reached the conclusion that MC is an idiot only talking big. The conversation between harem members repeats. Unnecessary dialogues etc
Bueno pues he leído desde el capítulo número 1 hasta el capítulo número 79 con una buena historia la verdad este pero decidí dejar de leerlo porque menciona bueno deja claro una intención de que va a haber poliamor en la relación o sea tu pues sus mujeres con sus (la elfa y una demonia femenina)otras mujeres y pues es todo, es una magnífica historia una buena historia y pues el poliamor es lo único que me desagrada.
Shameless self appraisal:I like fun light hearted stories that will lift your spirits. But this one got a lil kick to it, sorry to the peaceful slice of life enthusiasts… we may involve a bit of spicy moments of action, thriller and mystery.I also enjoy punk-esk themes, so be prepared to witness sci-fi merge with fantasy.If I had to describe this story as a food it would be: fruit salad.I hope you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoyed creating it.자ㄹ머개스ㅁ니다 ?
I love this!!! very good good good good good good good good good good good good...
One of the novel I've liked the most since I started reading on this platform. Congrats Author I gave you all the golden tickets and power stone I had. Hope to see more of this amazing work.
A good novel with a clever, manipulative MC who does what he wants while controlling his emotions well and becoming powerful over time.The author did a good job with world building, characters but slow paced ( kinda slow imo )For the romance the MC has his Harem and we have Lemon scenes which are really hot.
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Three phrases: I lost the sense of Time, my mind was fresh and relaxing when I read, The world is immersive and the system of cultivation is wonderful.
I already read all the available chapters and I hope that the author if possible writes about the MC scene with each of the harem girls in order to better visualize them according to their personalities. Please
This is well written storyline. Plot and the background described well as for the concern of characters, they are crafted according to the gaming world stories.