Wes4151
Very interesting premise, top notch writing quality and a power system that makes you want to learn more about it. Writing this at only 20 chapters in, but I recommend people to try, if for nothing else then simply because the authors previous novel was incredible.
Interesting story development although the first few chapters of the story seemed to be a little scattered and all over the place, the author kicked things up in an interesting way. Vol- 2 writing quality improved.
Vol-3 we get some back stories
Volume 4 is the best of all the arcs so far.
Volume- 5 I never saw that plot twist coming
caught up to the raws.. the novel is pretty nice.. unlike fantasy simulator and astral apostle which take lots of chapters in other realm this novel doesn't take that many chapters in each realm.. though most of the chapters are in other realms it doesn't take an unreasonable amount of chapters for each realm where story is mainly in other realm n there's barely anything happening in the real world(currently MC spent a significant amount of chapters in main world)
another difference from the 2 novels is that there's no returning unless the entire simulation(traversal) is completed and once the simulation is completed there's nothing like returning to the same realm again(as of now) and millions of years have passed in those realms within a day in main world it seems
traversal isn't the power held only by the MC rather it's like cultivation in a cultivation world
it kinda seems to be a time stop during the traversal as millions of years pass by in the other realm per each day in main world but it's not yet that clear as MC's simulations have been pretty short lived like less than 30 years in other realm(as he had variety of reasons to leave early).. so even if he simulates for like 1000 years it would take a little more than 10 minutes in the real world(taking 1:3 million time ratio)
The power spike right from the start is just too much to keep this story intresting. You may like this story if op mcs are your thing but I will have to,pass on this on.
Could be so much better
What a great story I can literally feel the sweat and tears coming off the screen. I can tell you out a lot of work init this and I suggest you don't slow down I'm sure soon you'll be at the top of web novel
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It starts out, as most Chinese novels do, with a downtrodden, out of luck MC who suddenly receives good fortune in the shape of a wizard's hat shaped Virtual Reality helmet. The good point is that he needs to work to gain skills that can then be applied in real life but... it feels that his power progression is a bit rapid. On the other hand, the story is very well written and the emotional scenes are conveyed terrifically.
It will be interesting to see how well the story eventually develops.
I must commend the translator for such a good production. The use of language and expression are perfect plus the writing is enrapturing and drawing.
On the whole, i recommend reading it for a bit of a Sci-fi / Wuxia twist.
No word to say, Amazing story
I love this, I am giving 5 starts in all because it is.............................. Hdhdbxjdnxjdndjdbjdbdkaosiebdhdbcjdnxjdjdjebdhxhxbdbdueoaoqoqoq
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need more improvement
Quite a good system story. Does what a system story should in showing clear progression, clear rules for progression, and of course most importantly, a satisfying payoff for getting that progression. Looking forward to how this develops later.
Love it! The main caracter is crazy genious whom always solve his problems in the most unexpected way. AND IT'S FUN!!! Yet the other carracters are not pushovers and i think more of them will get good background.
