The writing has no flaws and the story development is quite nice. The stability in updating could be a lot better. There's a good amount of world background as well. The characters are really good and you can notice that the knife has given Mike a more violent personality.
Again, my sincerest appreciation to everyone who shows their love and support for Picturesque. I'm planning on finishing it soon and writing another masterpiece.
Listen I've been here for a while and I can definitely say this is worth the read. The author has made great improvements in his writing and is definitely dedicated so come a long for the ride.
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a very good novel, glad I discovered this story right now. like you already know this story contains mature content, that's also one of the reasons I read this and I'm quite sure many other readers also read because of this matter. firstly, the plot is good not all about ***, but still for me personally, author the proportion between normal chapter and *** was not that much hope the author can increase and make it more constant like 18-25 normal chapter to enco.unter *** chapter. also hope author can make it kinkier and full fill our reader's fantasy, after all, it's the point of writing and reading a fantasy novel. so far ****** with the aunt is already hot . but mc need other like cuckold other powerhouse/enemy, duo sister and many other fantasy ??
The story is easy to follow. It is not hard to read, but there are a couple of spelling mistakes (might have been mixed by now). I like that the novel updates weekly. The time waiting isn't that long, but it's just enough to keep the tension. It also doesn't put too much stress on the writer and he can stay creative that way. The story progresses at a good pace. The end of each chapter always makes you wonder what will happen next. The characters are a bit plain. Sometimes it's hard to recognize the reasons why the character does a certain action. There are also a couple of times where the character says something that no one would ever say and that specific situation. The world where the story takes place doesn't get described that much, but enough to visualize something and that's really enough. Overall, the book is interesting.
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more more more more more more more more more more more more More more more more more more more more more more updates please i super love the story