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Am glad fate led me to this wonderful piece of art! it's suspense filled and the character design is just outstanding. Am dying to know more about Kayden and hope this book goes far. Good job Author on this novel! Do add more chapters soon.
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To begin, I find the synopsis quite well defined and gives the overall idea of what the novel is about. Chapters length is quite long but has the capability to hook the reader till the end. The actions between the dialogues are depicted nicely and the dialogues are well written. The characters are unique.
Overall, A perfect read. Looking forward to read more chapters
Easily the best novel in this run for trial. No nationalism by right of disparaging other countries. Not an overpowered MC but he’s been lucky so far no doubt. A ‘smart’ MC but not a monstrous genius - Well he is to others in cultivation speed due to the gold finger.
I swear if that trash Global Survival makes it...the racism seeps into you through osmosis thats how thick it is
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say.
Very different and unique book with very good realistic villainous character. writing quality very high, suspense plus story build up and background is very interesting. characters arw written properly not giving the idea that they are forced or 2d.
It's a pretty simple novel, overall, but I enjoy it a good bit. It has several cute points. The conflicts are annoying, but not excessively, I don't think. I think it's somewhat realistic. Not everyone will like you even if you're perfect.
I'd read more if I could.
Dear fellow readers, this is not a spoiler I repeat, this is not a spoiler because it is seen in the 1st chapter that this is a SYSTEM NOVEL!!!! Yeah u heard it right ,
and not just any system novel but to upgrade the level of low grade martial world as the main importance.
A good story with fast story development that l like and enjoy.
The mc is also been woven amazingly and is not some hero complex **** head.
Some other characters in background has capability to improve story further and they some time do that too.
I haven't read far but honestly the translation is just horrible and makes it unreadable in my opinion. Sometimes I really have no idea what a paragraph is even supposed to mean and the gaming terms are just complete **** (e.g. blood volume instead of HP like wtf).
The last chapter i read seemed to be explaining the world background but i understood just about jackshit.
hey .. if you have any kind of suggestion Monster can write your thoughts here .. I made this novel for my very good gamers friends .. especially Cloud, rome, Lyz and others .. hope they see this story ..
This book keeps getting better and better I can’t stop reading it so please keep writing this book and please write the next chapters soon so I’ll be able to read it thank you
