A good history , i can feel the flow and the MC only made 1 foolish action til now a m a z i n g
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Read till chap 39, Tokyo drift IX. You will understand. Still if you can take some emotional damage I suggest you read it. It has really good concept and storyline.
I am waiting for new chapter :(
Sigh, Maybe I should read this novel a third time?
Finally!!!
Time to start!
Once a phoenix dies , ashes decay, yet the vermillion rise anew.
Hahahaha the “-100/10” part made me laugh
Boring...
I love the story and the way you write it. Writing quality, updating stability, story development, character design, and world background are so good. Success for you ❤
This is a little different from typical transmigration novels. When we are introduced to MC in the first few chapters, he is already OP with photographic memory, great sword skills and a clear mind skill that allows him to see through others’ muscles, bones and minute movements. He has a bodyguard job that seems a little low level given his prowess. He has encounters with several beautiful women, who are awed by him. Men jealous of him send him challenges to fail miserably. It’s an okay read, but I wanted to see more of MC’s will/ motivation. In essence, I am not convinced by what drives him to do as he does.
Reading the first paragraph of chapter 1 had me want to drop asap, skipping to chapter 40 cemented my decision. Rating 1 star.
Chapters lack depth, no descriptive writing at all other then basic stuff, lacking in details and most important the story has no flow. I felt this was a creation of a ten year old, the very first paragraph was so lacking and held the most basic description of the main character it was boring.
Author here, being shameless again.
I'm trying to hit two birds with one stone here.
The two things I wanna say are 1.) The story is not a harem. I don't know why someone tagged it like that. Haha 2.) I regretted giving my novel four stars before so I'm now taking this chance to give it a 5 hahaha
THANKS BTW FOR READING THIS REVIEW AND STORY! <3 GUYS! XD