Love this story. Other than a couple of chapters repeated it keep me interested.
Nice book!
Long, drawn-out story that is missing the most basic formatting, aka paragraphs. The premise is good, and while there are some parts that are well written, the lack of formatting and long drawn out chapters encouraged me to skip around until I found the most important details.
I am currently on chapter 3, and the protagonist has already faced a rollercoaster of events: he lost his inheritance, tried suicide, fled, and then experienced a significant time skip. In these three chapters, he abruptly transitions to working multiple jobs, but the process is barely described. My preference, perhaps biased, is for a story where the main character overcomes adversity from weakness to strength or poverty to wealth. I was hoping for a detailed exploration of his struggles, loneliness, and the challenges of evading his family.
Instead, we get a sudden leap forward with numerous unexpected occurrences, which were amusing but not what I expected from a tale with a classic underdog growth arc. The pacing felt rushed, reminiscent of clichéd Wattpad fanfiction, and the development of relationships with supporting characters is virtually nonexistent. Even if I continued reading, I doubt I would form an emotional connection with the characters.
As an avid reader, I look for immersive storytelling that conveys the MC's journey and the dynamics between characters. So far, this book has not met those expectations. I understand that opinions can change, and I do not wish to criticize the author or those who enjoy the novel; this is merely my initial impression based on the first three chapters.
Additionally, the excessive five-star reviews initially drew me in, but now I'm feeling somewhat disappointed. The pacing issue, particularly the rapid introduction of friendships without proper development, is what stands out to me.
I really wanna read it but I want ask question, is this a clische romance novel or normal novel with romance element in it?
does anybody know where to pick off after manhwa?
Her deciding to betray his trust like that is one thing. Her playing with him for months while sucking somebody else’s d*ck is another. She should’ve just ended things with mc to save at least a little bit of his dignity.
I do not know the circumstances and I will never find out. But it makes no sense. If she did it to protect him, she should’ve also protected him from the trauma she inflicted on him with her decision. Or she should have told him. But if she couldn’t because that AP is a god, then idk why he needed to force her into having an affair with him in the first place. There are so many things that make no sense in her betrayal.
I’m just saying that if I was mc I would’ve rather died standing with the love of my life by my side till the end instead of living knelling, cucked betrayed and forever alone.
Probably js cuz people see its popular and decide to read it
What does QT means?
When will be 385 is out I want to know the release time
Can you please tell me how to publish a novel on thes site?
Exactly it's like who has more artifacts they win even after they comprehend laws and domains they on using artifacts...