An absolutely great read. Great story written by an author who knows how to open the world in his writings to his readers in a manner that relatable. Brilliant writing style that is never too difficult to understand and very enjoyable. Reading this story is really a memorable experience that one will be implanted in ones mind. I absolutely recommend it to anyone who loves a good well written masterpiece.
Normally when i find a good novel i will review it meticulously and try to get everybody to give it a try, at least with the 39 free chapters, and this novel is indeed one such that would warrant that. However web novel has been on a streak of choosing **** novels and letting better ones like this one go untranslated hence i will not do a huge review. Read the 39 free chapters and even if you don't completely love the novel you will at least want its continued translation
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It has a decent start that’s going somewhere.
Only problemS are within the grammar. Some sentences had minor problems.
The big problem however is that the Author mixes up his past and present tense.
This honestly puts me off as someone who grew up with English and it might affect my writing if i get into so imma stop reading.
My advice is to get software like grammarly or just get an editor but this is the author’s story so he can do whatever he wants.
Maybe in the future, I’ll come back to this.
I found this book to be a whole new approach to the VR genre. 10/10 would recommend for people who like reading the VR genre.
What's it's real name ?
Ch-10 - This story is doing the most for no reason.
MC Background - Either the MC came from a futuristic time or the 21st century - never made clear
MC - No idea why the author choose to reincarnate this guy - There's no need, nothing makes him unique, his system is given on the cheap, not a savvy MC; He complains about not having meat, kills a leopard and just leaves the body - bruh
The system / game - The game settings are strange, who would wait 16 human years for their character to reset - it feel complicated for no reason
MTL - Seems to end at 768 with Author admitting to having plot holes and rushed the ending
Hey author here. As always I'm giving myself a rating. I'm introducing a new type of system in this novel world. A borrowing system.
Psst!!!! Here's a spoiler. The MC will borrow items from this system. Don't miss this!!!!!!!
Getting thrown into a world of werewolves and vampires — not my favorite genre but this story has been written really well with some amazing description to back it. This book has a unique style of writing. The characters are depicted vividly and the drama between them is strong and very enjoyable. I also love its sprinkles of fantasy, the lycan and vampire is a powerful twist to the story. All the best!!!
Love it!!! Compared to most romance novels on this site, this story is much more mundane, in a good way. The MC an FL are not super arrogant, fithy rich supermodels that exist just to face slap all antagonists in existance. No, this is a warmhearted story about pure, innocent, adorable young man that experiances love for the first time. As it happens, the young woman he fancies just happens to be a reincarnated lady, making her full of mature allure in a youthful body. Super cute story! Cant wait to read more!
Very good story. She has a lot of future, and boy, the main thing is milfs, you have to have very hot milfs. For me, the main thing is to take the ***iest and hottest milfs and make them wives and get them pregnant, because pregnant milf is too beautiful. Well, that's just a minor wish. But the story is good people, read it and you will like it, especially those who like milfs.
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