Alright , I read the book til the cap 14-15 and those chapters killed me like why would the Mc let himself get stuck by a lie ? Like it was a good book by that point, the fact that he lost the handicap of being mute killed it a llitle bit but those chapters killed me, I will read a few chapters more but if there isn't a good explanation I will need to drop the novel
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I feel like Doctor Jackal and Ryan are bound together by fate or something lol. This novel has such an interesting plot and a beautiful story line. Looking forward to more updates!
Hi, guys Rysangel here. Please read my two other novels too, and give some feedback. Should I continue to write that in a serious mood or should I make a new story with a more light-hearted comedic tone?
I don't usually write a review because for me, as a reader, finds it not worthy of my precious time. If I find good novels, then I'd just commend it in my mind. However, I was taken aback while reading this. It was a well-written story with great potential. This definitely deserves my 5.0 rating.
Rejoice, for I, who has an unfathomable taste in novels, have commended you. I hope you continue this story and grow more as a writer.
I'm all open for 'sister-in-laws' characters but not when your cucking your own brother and had already established a relationship. This is called Lazy Writing!
If you like paragon of sin, you will like this to certain extent, The main character cucks the lucky son of plain for a reason, the MC do act smart
130 chapters in and its slower than snail-like progression.. meme references are so abundant.. it was fine at first but now it takes up half the chapters so it just feels like a waste to buy a chapter
A simulated apocalypse with characters with basic designs but different characteristics to them makes the reader want to read more of the story. While the world building might seem too similar to other novels, it is a common thing to add game elements and such to a setting like this. Since it's still too early in the novel to make a comment on the main character, I'm still interested in how he will develop throughout the story. I'm really hyped to read more of this story, looking forward to the new updates !
Also, I love the cover, it really attracts the reader's attention.
Read it until around chapter 100 in the raws.
Slow story. This is certainly not a xianxia power rush. As another commenter as said, this is more like a slice of life novel. Some things to note: Just the fact that the MC's first major cultivation level has needed dozens of chapters to breakthrough should give the reader the right expectancy.
The plot is the usual for this type of novel so don't expect great originality.
The writing cannot be considered very good, but it is way above what we poor mortals are usually been fed in this site.
The author seem to have done some little research about what he is talking about and not just spiting completely random BS just because it looks cool.
Some characters are not just zero dimensional and could actually menace to reach 1 dim. In particular the MC. The author has managed to use all the tired and overtried chinese webnovel MC pseudo characteristics but managed to make them blend into something of a silhouette of a human being. That is a real achievement.
This also means that our MC is not a copy of schwarzenegger's terminator.
Unfortunately this also means that there are irritating situations and characters that hinder our easy reading flow. Some because of the way this caricature of a world influence its beings, and some just because the author is not that good at humor as needed in those cases. Note that this not mean that this story doesn't have humor. On the contrary. There is plenty of soft and even subtle humor, which is appropriate for a slice of life type of story.
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This author gives the feel of someone who is on its way to be a very capable professional writer, but only the future can tell.
All in all this novel is readable and, given our drought of good books to read, might even deserve a 4 stars rating from me.