You should use grammarly. Right now your novel is so riddled with bad grammar that it is not worth reading. So go to grammarly.com. oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
I like how the story starts, I can't express this enough. The intrigue built up by the interstellar-esque, rather, space adventure is really gripping, and the feeling carries through to the end of the first chapter. I do feel that disjointed feel between the first and second chapter needs some revision, but the continuing of the plot line that gripped me in the next chapter is really good.
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I hope that the chapter will release pretty fats and I want to see how op the mc will get when her got the God Relm System. Hop the MC is OPPPP!!!!!!!!!!
it's a great book with an interesting premise, but I do think that it could sorely use an editor. it's never anything huge that I can't figure out, but theres definitely typos including the MC being called Seth not Elias quite a few times
I find the story interesting and would love reading more so I’ll give it 5⭐️
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the only bad side of this story is bad grammer but it's manageable, and low amount of characters interaction side character's gives the feeling of an npc.thnx
Love the way you used Philippines as your setting. And on top of that, a slice of life story. The story has refined moments and worth the read. Will definitely be on my books to read. Cheers for you!
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It’s pretty decent just not for me. A lot of the fun that these strories about the mc becoming a non human is the struggle to stay human and that just seems to be missing. It feels like mcs just succumbed to his baser instincts and now we’re reading about an unintelligent animal. But that’ just me they quality is pretty good and there’s nothing I’d say is bad just something I’m not a fan of
oh man! This is something I wish I had! the system. diamond..i like her so much! the beginning was amazing. her kindness to the bird was so refreshing to read. the rewards were well deserved. don't stop please, write more. I will be reading ur work from now on.