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© 11:11 `The Wish`
I was sitting in one of the lounge chairs on the balcony overlooking the back gardens. Julian sat in the opposite chair, looking out across his property. We both had dressed and sat with drinks Ileana had brought us. Julian had taken the day off (I had thought it before, but it must be nice to be your own boss) and we were finally talking through the past day's confessions.
Hale folded his hands in front of him. "I have an offer to make you, Gene."
This will be the place for them and their descendants to take root in the future.
Where is the end of the story?It is missing at least 5 - 20 chapters to finish correctly, right?Because there, it is: He conquered the last great wicked ... And that's all.When is he of himself?Has his emotional state disappeared?How does he manage this for Suzanna?How does Christian end with the legacy of the throne?What becomes of Alice, will she ask him, or vice versa?With or without the help or interference of Suzanna, one way or the other ...Where is the end, what ...It's the big void, there ...Empty...
By looking at the stats if this book, it reminds me that i had read the raw of this book 3times. It is truely my favourite. And it is a shame that people stop reading it only because it has a similar start with RtW and Heaven’s Path. They have no idea that this book is those two books’ senior, which is completed years ago, and it was those two books that used the setting of this very book! Da*mmit what a shame
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haven't read it yet but i'm gonna leave this as 5. i will update it later when i'm done reading it and hopefully it will not change hahaha.
I'm the type who doesn't bother reviewing novels cuz it seems too bothersome but this one is a fking hidden gem and I couldn't stand it having only 3 ratings
Lazy writing with countless mistakes. Obvious that English isn't the author's first language. Information/exposition dumped unskilfully from the onset of the story instead of lightly sprinkled throughout the beginning of the story ruining any chance of blooming a sense of intrigue. Horrible naming sense such as the beast continent named Bestia etc. Extremely clichéd, archetypal characters, where the pretty girl takes interest on the MC for nothing worth mentioning. Guns is a magical world as marginal originality in an otherwise completely original story base. Also the character descriptions are very thorough but bland. MC doesn't start as overpowered but it's painfully obvious that he will be soon so say goodbye to any tension that could have been bred.
The author, Starting of the Novel is quite interesting and intriguing. Honestly, I like this...Well, I want to give a 5-star rating but you know this is just starting therefore I can't give you one. But Novel Deserve it. I would appreciate it if you after posting the chapters, read them slowly and with focus so you can avoid any spelling mistakes or errors...It will be quite helpful and don't get offended because this is just advice.
love this story please continue it i would love to read more
