I love this book soooooooo mucchhu..... thanks to the author.....qin mo and Fu jiu......ooohhhh❤️??????????????????????????????????:-:-
I really like what you got going on here, but the grammar is pretty bad. Regardless am enjoying this a lot, but please re-read your chapters at least 3 times before updating the story.Also, you might wanna correct some/alot of grammatical mistakes on the last chapters, because for a lot of people the first chapters are always their first impressions of the book.
An amazing novel that we can look upon to. The story is still developing and still has a lot to offer as the story progress. I'll look forward to this novel and saved it in my library. Keep it up.
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Hi there! Thank you for even making it this far! This is my attempt at a holistic breakdown of this work, but please keep in mind that it is my first time writing a story of this genre. TLDR: Not a typical OP ML who levels up in a game. More of the journey (both mental and in-game) of a top eSports player. Inspired by actual eSports players and discusses their struggles, games, and career. Writing Quality: Clear and understandable writing with minimal grammatical errors. Generally reread and edited at least twice before publishing. I personally pride myself on vivid descriptions of scenery and emotion and try to add small Easter eggs or foreshadowing, but it might read a bit wordier than most works of this genre.Stability of Updates: Pushing for an update at least once every two days. I am a current student, so please excuse me if I disappear for a few days. That being said, if you vote and comment, chances of me updating or even giving a mass release are very high :3Story Development: Will be a moderately paced story, roughly divided into four quarters that mirror the ML's place in life: 1. Casual Play 2. Rise of eSports 3. Height of eSports Career 4. Forced towards Retirement/New Commercialization Trends *A lot of the plot drivers will be personal growth, both career-wise and interpersonal relationship-wise, so do not head into this story expecting a straight leveling up story.*Character Design: Very realistic character designs, with each person complete with their own strengths and flaws. More importantly, there will be character growth and development. World Background: Realistic setting that mirrors the history of eSports. The game, Kings of Valor, is loosely based on popular MOBAs such as League of Legends, except with different names, champions, and champion skills. (And yes I play League a lot ;-; Tbh wayyy more than I should for my own good)Warnings: Not the typical videogame story that focused on the game itself or the somehow OP ML but instead centers around character development, gamers' relationships to family and friends, societal expectations, and choosing between dreams and reality. Disclaimer: All coincidences with real life names and events are not intentional and are not intended to offend anyone.Enjoy! To see if people actually read through these reviews...if you play League, attach a GIF of your main! Also, if you wanna support me through Ko-Fi for the new Diana Ultimate skin, I swear I'll update ;-;
I shamelessly give you 5 stars because i love all fanfic novel ATG and not only that but i think your writing quality was good enough. I hope you don't rushed this novel...
oh there is great catastrophe in great xia... first thing foreigners do... lets make fun of china... just to get face slapped... MC is OP and can fix every problem on earth, but chooses only to protect the great xia... couldnt get past 10 chapters... low quality wish fulfillment power trip fantasy with extra nationalism and probably standard BS racism...
The raw idea of this story is just simply amazing! I have never read something like this, and what makes it more alluring to read is the execution! And I can tell this will grow more than we expect! Cheers to the author!
Please be quick and release the remaining parts, I'm so hungry for them, the book keeps you turning to the next page. That Prime is a goddamn psychopath. Please be quick and release it on time ??????? pleeeeeeaaaaaasssseeeee
Welcome all pervert.. This is the story for us. Mc transmigrated and found cheat As soon As he arrived.. Cheat that required him to have ***. Who not jealous??
How long is this novel gonna be and is it gonna be posted in ladge batches?Translation is really good and novel is actually pretty interesting just dont know jf theirs gonna be more chapters
Are you tired of I the female lead am fixing this bad boy the 500th novel of this trope on Webnovel. Read this while Stan still has more development than Ez she has to confront her values and ideals to make their relationship work too. If you're looking for a more balanced romance try this book