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Y'all should give this book a chance. it is worth a try. I love it even though it is still ongoing
Just want to read 10 minutes but story was good so I want to read more ?
Good novel so far. Red has 2 other great novels and this is looking like it will be the third. The concept is slightly different to the other two but the setting is nicely done and has room to be great.
Within the first chapter you can tell how much work the author built into the world building. The characters also actually act how they are meant to act which is an issue you see in some other novels. The only issue you could possibly have is that there are some grammar issues but the author gets better with it as it continues. But it really is one of the most world built system novels I have ever read.
I'm expecting a lot from this author. It has a great start and a lot of potential and its pacing is to my liking. I like the synergy between the characters and the world building the author has done up to this point. I'm expecting this novel too rise in the rankings and become one of the top novels on this website! definitely recommended a great read!
great story and thank you for novel . .
Must have made a mistake, it should be 5 stars and not 4.8. Hmm it actually showed 4stars. Presumptuous! They dare! Privilege anniversary day coming!
This is my first review here so i will try make it short and on the point, This 15 years old MC is with the memory of a 30 years old special force kind of a freak , he can be patient but he can't help becoming a lolicon, what a hypocrite Mc and his cliché reasoning!!! Right?, he gets angry easy dispite of his special force Experience of some brat with his 21 century civilised hiritage of earth, this protagonist is an embrassement to all earthling readers here, shame on you pervert MC.
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Amazing work, love th MC and his attitude on the Mafia life!!!!!!!!!This is a great read and extremely captivating!!!!!!!!!!!! Keep up the great work and release more chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Hi! This is Ada, an editor of the international Suspense/Thriller Writing Contest I. I see great potential in your book, but your book is so underrated here. Thus, I invited you to join the contest a week ago. Please reply to me. Let’s discuss in detail.
