Basically a standard "normal world become dungeon world" but ... With great writing, excellent character design and developpement ( even though some part feel rushed, that totally within acceptable range for me ), and globally a worthy read alltogether.
What an amazing and beautiful story. Story is super exciting and does not revolve around the man though the love is incredible. Protagonist has her own world and is full of strength in her personality. Storyline is very intriguing makes you want to read more. Also lots of recipes in the book that makes me want to actually make a dish.
So far so good.
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Good novel, good character design, but still could be better. I prefer your other work, Soul Eye. Was becouse of SE that I look for other work of you. And I think that you could finish SE first.
What I learnt in this novel is that going to school is important. If the goddess of creation had gone to school, everything that happened in the plane of dreams wouldn't happened at all.
Story is going great so far some typos and grammar errors here and there, so far good character design and background, the world background is explained somewhat enough (as of chapter 9) the story has fast and slow pacing with some time skips, all in all good enough, but it can be better! 8.2/10 recommended read
Hello, after reading about the first 100 of the chapters, i must say the book’s pretty good, especially for reading as a pastime. Although i must say the chapters at the outset are adorned with characters just conversing about childish subjects and cringeworthy remarks. I must say as the author has improved with his/her writing as the chapters have materialized. The only downside is that the author doesn’t describe the characters often whenever they appear. As a result, I just end up forgetting how most of the characters look like whenever I come back reading it after a while, due to the fact that my mind is also preoccupied with reading many other books other than this one. So i hope the author considers this little flaw. Ty!
Yg gua suka dari novel ini adalah world building nya keren super duper keren tapi yg gua ngk suka itu dari sistem lvlup power di ras MC kenpa harus dari kntl gituloh baru tiba2 ada garuda juga padahal sudah bereinkarnasi yg mana seharusnya semua yg berhubungan dengan dunia awal itu terputus kecuali kalo MC punya sistem mensumon tapi ini kan ngk ada. Harusnya sistem lvlup nya itu di ubah jadi menggunakan pernapasan naga untuk menyerap mana ato yg lain kah jangan malah dari kntl baru yg dibayar untuk tambah kuat adalah emosi nya sendiri hererere nt kadang-kadang nt kesel banget gua njer bacanya
Trash fic trash system very keng die below average MC who needs to put in exponentially more effort to get similar gains as others Pathetic attempts at humour
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The beginning was good and original, the MC is not someone with mercy is also somthing nice. but later the story became less original and fun to read but still fun so if you have time, you can read it.