Ok, I have to say, I’m really enjoying this story so far! Taryn is such a strong lead, but what I love most is how real she feels—like she’s tough, but you can tell she’s got layers and struggles she’s working through. And Lucien… whew. That guy is equal parts infuriating and charming. Their dynamic is so fun to read because you never know if they’re going to argue or actually start trusting each other (maybe both?).The cursed chain thing is such a cool idea—it’s constantly throwing them into situations where they can’t avoid each other, which keeps the tension high. The world-building is solid, too. I love how the danger feels real, but the story still makes time for little character moments that make you care about what happens next.If you’re into stories with strong leads, reluctant partnerships, and a slow-burn kind of tension, I’d definitely recommend this. Can’t wait to see what happens next! There is smut too if you stick with it. Slow burn and all. lol
Great narration, great characterization, I like the MC that was introduced so far! Going to marinate this first before reading it whole. So far I love the chapter 1 ^^)/
It's good to read, some characters are lovely and memorable, but for the love of God.... Author remember the colors you give to characters... MC went through three to four different eye colors, not to mention the girls. If you can't remember, create some side notes with vague details regarding their pallettes.
This is a no hesitation ten on ten for me.The way the author has depicted EVERYTHING made me feel like I was walking along the characters, and being the invisible witness to what was going on.I especially love that I can immediately empathise with the FL and when the ML came in I could practically taste his aura (pure alpha, trust me) on my tongue.This is worth a read. Raw in all the best ways ???❤️
I like the story.. good work and keep it up
so far so good. a lot of potential. will be interesting to see what happens.
ceritanya bagus , saya merekomendasikan untuk dibaca
Love the work, author! keep it up! yurification!
Yeah, so i had to shamelessly give myself another review but this time i gave myself 5stars.the last review i gave myself had a low rating because i had just started writing and to be honest i didn't have any confidence in my wirting. I know that i can delete it, but my first critic came as a reply under my review, so i am very reluctant in deleting it.Although my confidence has increased, i am still a learner in this aspect.and just to add a little something, a little over-view of MC's character. A lot of people critic it saying that he was described to be apathetic and then later on he started acting like an 11 year old ..yes he was apathetic and he acts childish now, and there is a logical reason for that ( I can't say the reason because i feel like i would be dropping a spoiler.) After coming to the new world he realized something that he never knew. if you want to know what then read the book...Thank you ??...signed: shameless/crazy author...
I really like this novel a of the best novel I have read so far////////
I staring at Nurseperson, and he ignored me.
Not long, after few second my class was clearly visible, I entered the class and my eyes immediately focused on my seat, and i just look at my friend, his name is Writerz, he was sitting beside my desk.