best xianxia parody, just make sure you endure mc antics at first he seems like idiot but in funny way, there also reason for that, grammar and writing quality is great, he also not hypocrite
One of the very few good "kingdom building" novels on Webnovel.
Well, I really want to give you full stars but even you said what you're not good at in your own review, even through all that you're still one of my favourite author here in WN, I just hope you keep doing what you're doing, and improve of course, and you'll be good, I really think this is one of the best stories out there, thank you for writing this and your other novels too, especially with what the world is going through right now...
AQUI E BRAZUCA CORRE NEGADA, falando sério está obra tem potencial , por enquanto está bom mas não pare metade das fan-fics não prosperam porque os autores não continuam a obra , e as pessoas acabam perdendo interesse.
This is literally a LMS fanfic and a bad one at that. There is nothing wrong with gaining inspiration, but ripping the MCs motivation to play the game, the games creators motivation to create the game, the entire login and character-creation sequence from LMS is just too much for me to overlook, and i last read that novel 3 years ago, yet could instantly point this out.
Uninstall life pls.
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This is surprisingly a good read, the protaganist is intelligent and crafty. He use his brains more than his brawn. It has interesting side character as well. I hope this book get selected because I really wants to know what happens next.
I frankly love this story. There is not a lot of like this around and I love sci fi. I hope this story continues to at least 50 chapters so that people catch this story.
Who the **** picked this monologue garbage?!!!Who the **** picked this monologue garbage?!!!Who the **** picked this monologue garbage?!!!
No offence to u author but read this and waited till i read all chapters b4 i came to any opinion and this is that ur story is crap the system was a waste the point behind a system even it isn't like the normal op system is to offer asistance all it did was talk do some increased healing and pump adrenaline then u tortured and killed a 2 yrs old off for some character development that didnt pull through and ur mc behave like a pussy in the face of death after dying 3 times whats the point of all that training if he aint gonna use it cause it clearly states he was strong enough to beat his father when he was goin all out and then there was making it seem like there person that could fight his father that was attacking them yep so in all crap.