HUH ANOTHER RATE FOR MY BROSKI BRUHTASTICK...
SOOOOOOO YEAH I JUST LIKE YOUR STORY ALREADY SO I GUESS I JUST GONNA RATE FOR 3 OR 4 TIME...
AND BYE MY BROSKI BRUHTASTICK...
B R U H . . .
Original but boring.
Things I liked: The MC is basically an in-game scholar which is a cool new take that I wish had more play. Their family owns the game in addition to a bunch of other cool sci-fi related products/labs which is both an interesting character background and could wow the reader with ideas about the future. (Unfortunately, so far it is way underused) The world is a mix of different cultures from around the world and throughout history which hopefully means breaking away from East Asia/Europe (which is the generic setting for many of these). The fights are interesting and well done.
The downsides: All of this sounds amazing but the delivery just felt flat to me. The only two cool sci-fi things actually mentioned are the video game and something to generate energy. The world feels modern rather than futuristic because of this. The family isn't interesting. Nothing wrong with that IRL but in a story it means that the chapters with the father drag due to a lack of interest. The sister is so in and out that she isn't much of a character. Again it makes sense why this would be IRL but in a story we need characters that grow and are interesting. There are glimmers of this with the MC's schoolmates and the former rankers in game but they aren't given enough time/enough of a spotlight to develop into anything. The game story is really slow. I don't really care about him doing a quest that everyone else has to do, just slightly quicker. The ghost sub plot is great but is buried under ... an escort quest that he takes for ??? reasons? The quest to gain Gaia's interest was cool too but the rewards were uninteresting. Ultimately his rewards are bland (50 chapters in and there is nothing that stands out), his actions are uninspired (there are no cool finding hidden treasures or bosses, just knowing how to get a base class), and when he does get interesting quests he either ignores them (he ignores the ghost until he can't anymore) or declines them (The oracle's epic quest). When the author mentioned the world was a mix of ours, I was hoping for a hybrid and therefore new culture. Not just a copy paste of cultures in different places, and those places are just European ones we have all seen before.
Verdict: Worth a read to see if it is for you. The author may well be on to something eventually but I'm not willing to slog through more chapters to get to 'the good stuff'.
It's not a terrible novel nor is this novel anything exciting. Just an average novel that is strong with the Cringe and the Tropes. Would recommend this to those who are killing time waiting for the better novels to update. Anyway I thought this would be good, I'm going back to New Age of Summoners
I just read chap 49 and 50.......AND BRO I'M SO FREAKING HYPE! These next chapters are probably going to be my favorite! My boy Zero is about to fight Transmuters old right hand man! Can't wait to see what this young hero is made of. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
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One of the best I've read so far thank you for this and I hope you continue with your
genius mind to make this novel not only
touch my heart but others to bring them to a world of your creation thank you again. Also I hope you are loved by many and more thank you from one below the shadow's
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For those who came for the #Overpowered tag, MC gets nerfed at chapter 32.Such a massive disappointment. It came out of nowhere too. He literally just went home to grab something, suddenly a demon appears, forces him down the lake, some girl is conveniently trapped inside that saves him, and then there's the "inheritance" that comes with a trap.
Wow. It is such a nice story. Every character has their own personality.They don't feel forced. Didn't have a lot of fights but I can see every fight may be meaningful in the future. I need more chapters.
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There are only 23 chapters out right now, but so far its great. The grammar is much better than the start of the authors other book.......,,
Please keep publishing daily, it's promising :)......................................................................................